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My First Ebony Love (erotic)
by Sandra A. Mushi → (All Poetry by Sandra A. Mushi)
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The air smelt of coconut trees and the sea

Native tongues greeted me, I felt warm and free

Free from the pollution, free from the daily rush

Free from the metropolis noise, free from the city mush

The warm African sun had withered from the sky

The birds chirping their final goodbye

 

As I dream of this exotic wondrous place

Infront of me stood an Ebony queen in lace

Smiling, beautiful black eyes dancing with life

With a smile that could cut through butter without a knife

“You alone,” she winked and drawled sultry

Yes, I nodded, in her presence feeling paltry

 

Her sensual eyes never leaving mine

She pulled a chair asking if I was fine

Sweating, palpitating, I couldn’t breath

Need air, I wished the terrace was a heath

Her temptress smile taunting me, teasing

Shifting on my chair uneasily she took a pleasing

 

For I had never seen such beauty, I craved her desire
She was sinfully beautiful and sensual and I was on hell fire

She was the budding beauty of her sexual flower

With the glowing energy, her sensuality was her power

When she smiled her eyes seemed to sparkle

Her small nose adorned with tiny dark freckles

 

 “Ain’t you going to order me a drink?” she asked smiling

I couldn’t move, couldn’t talk, slowly in love I was falling

High into the sky my heart lifting, by talons it was gripped

Talons of love that soon would have my heart ripped

With her striking exotic beauty I was mesmerized

I couldn’t help it but her face I drunk in and memorized

 

A waiter she summoned with an skilled wave

“Hi Joe, how is your wife?” with a sensual smile she did rave

“The usual please,” to salivating Joe she did point

 She seemed to be a regular at this upper class joint

In awe I was transfixed with her big black eyes

I stared, salivated, my hypnosis wasn’t disguised

 

Broken was the spell swiftly by an unseen force of the night's fathers

From my exotic dream I was suddenly aware of others

In a business suit he gave me a knowing grin

The tourist gave me a-thumbs up and ordered a gin

Two ladies at the bar at my lovely visitor they glared

Their anger and envy they openly bared

 

“Candy,” she smiled, her hand on my now shaking knee

“Huh,” I blushed beetroot red as if I had been stung by a bee

“My name is Candy,” her alluring and tempting smile she applied

 “Why don’t we finish these in your room?” she got up before I replied

Like a blind man I followed her intoxicating strong perfume

Like a spellbound man, I retraced the way to my room

 

In the room the silence was pervasive like entering a tomb

Pushed me on the bed and over me she did loom

As she undressed me, I understood her purpose with no doubt

With her hot expert mouth my swelling she did mount

Until then I lingered with hardly a sound

Sucking my engorged shaft, shouting I was bound

 

Sliding down to let me enter her womb

Her hips like a carnival ride it brought about my doom

She engulfed me in raging rivers to unknown fates

Locked in a dance of ecstasy, threatening to erupt the floodgates

Dancing to the rhythm of her erotic rhyme

Resistance wearing thin, I erupted when it was time

 

She rose from a crumpled bed
Stretched her long arms above her head

Sheets pushed aside with a sensuous sigh

Leaving me in bed with a love-struck high

Dreamily I started planning my days ahead

Igniting imaginations in my head

 

Long enough I will keep her around

I silently thought, as in my Ebony love I had found

With a kiss from my African queen

She got off the bed and I felt the crown I did win

My days and night make happy she will
I knew and my dreams she will fulfill

 

From my thought I was roused “I’ve got to go, where is my money?”

Without a smile demanded my now dressed African honey

Just my wishful thought interrupted, baffled I was at first,

“Its business,” she said my mind putting to rest

When the price I was told, my old white face went pale

Exiting as she grabbed the cash, I wished it was a sale

 

 

Copyright Sandra A. Mushi . All rights Reserved
 
 


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 Reviews of "My First Ebony Love (erotic)"
Reviewed by Ingrid Khola (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
What an ending! Great twist.U are gud at being bad gal!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 14, 2005
great poetic tale...clap clap clap....love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
you have some great skills of description, ma'am! you can draw in a reader and keep us engaged as we make our way through your stories ... the ending was definitely a surprise, and it's great that you can write from multiple pov's!

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on July 8, 2005
Ah, but to fall into lust is not the same as to fall into love, so the moral of a story goes...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2005
Can't say I did not expect the ending. Fantastic write. Draws in the reader from begining to end......just in case they are wrong :-)


Reviewed by Letitia Blount
Reviewed on July 8, 2005
Great write and I love the rhythm, thanks for sharing!
Letitia

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
the master storyteller has struck again
splendid penning

joy and sunshine
hh


Reviewed by Masood Lohar
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
You have a natural flow in your words and in weaving the story which grabes the readers senses, keeping them guessing till at the end it bursts. It leaves a taste of the sour realities of life and human fragility. brilliant!

Masood

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
ROFL. Some men's egos just won't allow them to see the truth. Great write, Sandie.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
I was guessing, too. But the obvious did come to mind. I guess there are guys who can't spot a hooker. The one I've heard most about is the beautiful girl, who, upon close observation, become a guy!

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
I was all over the place with this write, Sandra! Trying to work it out as I went along, first the adolescent girl-thing; then the gay thing; then a dream; then an anthropomorphism (?? what!!)... yep, you had me guessing, but enjoying the ride (so to speak!) all the way through. Celebratory and sobering at the same time. Gettin money for nothin and love for free don't truly happen that much in the real world, does it - even in the most surrealy exotic of paradises!! Quirky and loaded as EVER! Well done, Kate xx

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
Care must be taken in the realms of love, for the true kind is hard to find. Nice write. Vivid imagination.

Reviewed on July 7, 2005
wonderful story you weave in your poetry, sandie; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
You had me from the start with this poetic tale, Sandra. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
You write with such beautiful abandon! Expertly done, Sandie!

Eileen

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

This is creativity flowing from the stream of intuition
to the lake of diverse emotional visions.

"My First Ebony Love" depicts dreams within a dream of
multi-personalities - staging a libidinal show in the theater
of imagination, - giving the reader a vivid story.

The writing gifts are given to many; the Gift to create literary
masterpieces is privilege of few; and You, Poet, were created to
be the live art of literary grandiose.

This poem, "My First Ebony Love" is a green bough of the
poetic tree on the prairie of creation.

I salute You, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 7, 2005
Sandra:

Wow! What a great story this is! I like the surprising ending!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
What an exotic write, replete with lush meanings, and a surprise ending to beat! Bravo!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
A bit of O'Henry. A surprise twist to cap a delightful read.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
Ebony love in this instance equates to faux love. Still, the ride was wonderful . . . until pay-up time.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 7, 2005
What you would call a sting in the tale Sandra
It pays to be cautious !
Peter


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