Moon and stars beckoning romance to us Sweet nothings I whispered into her ear Our hearts undulating in rhythm with our love A soft melodic thread weaving so gently, Shiny brown eyes, flooded with romance Shining so bright against the flickering candle light Her well manicured fingers on the crystal glass Our bodies swaying slowly through the night A serene river of gold flows through my soul As I gave into her gentle brown eyes Our souls moving together in rhythm of our love As the full moon romanced the cloudless night Not for a second wanting to leave my lady Hesitantly I stand and walk to the band For the song they played us five years ago I want played on this anniversary night As I place the tanzanite bracelet on her dainty wrist A few familiar faces on the way I see Courtesy being the order I smile and lightly wave “Hi Stu,” someone drawls, “will you buy me a drink?” No tonight is our night, just she and I Walking away quickly I hoped nobody did see To the band I reach and place my request Back I walk happily my mission almost complete Five years its been, with my beautiful gentle wife The door to her heart she’s always kept it open Even with my heart and soul always so lame On top of the world, I dance back to our love seat Arm in arm we will dance the night away Dancing with us will the stars in the cloudless night Dancing my way back two women I see Sitting with my wife as is they are old buddies “Make sure he pays you first, gurl“ a heave drawl I overhear “The s.o.b likes it dirty and freaky but won’t pay!” “We gotta warn a sista gurl,” the drawler muses to the other. "Remember with the twins, gurl? He never paid them a dime!" With laughter they leave, on a clear moonlit night
Copyright Sandra A. Mushi . All rights Reserved
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Reviews of "The Anniversary Night"
Reviewed by Ingrid Khola (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Talk about skeletons in the closet! Trust an ungrateful man to spoil it for you. This displays tremendous creativity,well done.
This could be a romantic short story.Characters just pop out everywhere in this poem.
blessin's to you, hope all is well. . .
blessin's Sis. Sandie,
cynth'ya
Well, I guess true love, when it finally catches up with us, covers over a multitude of faults if it is for real. And depends on whether something is definitely in the past or is instead part of an undisclosed ongoing present reality. But the truth comes up and bites us, whether old bones are slavering flesh, so this is a very poignant and sharply etched scenario you have walked us through here, Sandie. I wonder how many idyllic moments are shattered in this way? Perhaps when situations are emotionally loaded, all other manifestations of deep-seated feelings are stirred round about too, so it is a fascinating picture. Like Nordette, love your new biog collage! Thanks for your good wishes - all is going well, bless you. LOL Kate xx
Hey, Sandie. Was cruising about the Den and signed in to comment on this poem. It's one that I missed. Like Mark indicated, you're slaying me with these suprise endings. LOL. I really enjoyed this read. Made me smile. Like your new pics on your bio page too. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2005
Wow This is so romantic a beautiful way to spend an anniversary until that surprise ending! A little hint in the middle but never expected it to go any further. An anniversary to never forget what a shame. Cheaters never prosper. Beautiful poem. I love the new photo on your bio You sure are pretty such a beautiful smile.
Tracey xoox(c :)42
Ooh you tease. But I quite like being led up the garden path. Great twist at the end.
I'm tracking you now so I will not keep missing your posts.
love
Ian
L o v e O'Henry endings. Best of all worlds here, with the hot-hot-hot romance and cold-cold-cold ending. Too real, but. . .well-done! 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Sandie,
I love that you expressed this truth , because this happens .
people hate to see happy unity and they'll break their backs to
have theirs. Excellent Snadie!!!!!
Hope you're ok or great,..you're beautiful and you'll have it one day soon. Blesssings of real joy and united with a love worthy of you
now that SUCKS. for him, but i guess karma is a bee-yotch! literally and figuratively...how are you, sandra? your art continues to progress sista, love the form of this, and you with the surprise endings, yet again! lol well done!
YOu turned UP the degrees here Sandi dear- Wow- Excellently written-so different as you are- and WE are Blessed- Love&Light,Sheeeoxoxox- I've been away awhile my friend- but, I try to read as much as possible... I wrote 2 writings today- but, so much is taking me away- The den is my other life-LOL and I NEED it like a drug- so, it won't be long, till I have you in me- Love,Sheeeoxoxo GREAT WRite again-
Ouch, that would be bad if that did happen! Way to mess up a wonderful anniversary nite for sure!!!! Great write Sandra! Enjoyed it. It didn't turn out as I expected and you left the rest of the night open to wonder just what happened, I liked that! Hope you visit me again too, I am tracking you now! :)
Is this written from the male point of view? Is this written from the female perspective? Is she your wife? Dirty deeds done dirt cheap --- did the twin whores not get a dime? The Anniversary Night of what? Great mind bender here, Sandra. A thinking woman's poem!
The Wholly Book of Doo-Doo-Rot-on-Me is adult satirical humor featuring adult language and adult content, and the work is a parody of the Old Testament Book of Deuteronomy.
Peter
blessin's to you, hope all is well. . .
blessin's Sis. Sandie,
cynth'ya
Tracey xoox(c :)42
you must have met reality.
Still, those dreams are glowing embers.
Love & Light,
Joseph
I'm tracking you now so I will not keep missing your posts.
love
Ian
:)Sandy
I love that you expressed this truth , because this happens .
people hate to see happy unity and they'll break their backs to
have theirs. Excellent Snadie!!!!!
Hope you're ok or great,..you're beautiful and you'll have it one day soon. Blesssings of real joy and united with a love worthy of you
Rich Criso Suarez
This was soooo romantic at first, but the ending had surprised me!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Hugs
Tina
william .....peace & love
You stick the knife in, and then twist it to inflict more pain. As usual, showing your insight into human nature.
Ron
Regis
Eileen
Sage
Love Tinka
TRASK
But I like how this is writen from such a unique perspective..