Won't Figure It Out If You Try (poem) by Sandy Knauer on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

This is a poetic-philosophical flower scented with the aroma of
- eternity and now - pleasing the senses of knowledge.

"Won't Figure It Out If You Try" is wirtten with golden letters
on a platinum frame.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2005

oooo, Sandy, this is my kind of poem... ask anybody! (grin)

I think you used the repetitious line with great effect. There are layers in this, a playful delivery with a one-two punch here and there. ("When do people learn to hate") Your message hits home without any bullying. Sometimes that's how we get people to hear us. Good stuff!

katy xox.

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2005

People often eat their words and their hearts out too. I've given up trying to figure out why. Good one. Thanks for trying to figure it out.

Bob H

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 6, 2005

Sandy,

Outstanding rhythm and verse - Bravo on this marvelous write!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

....great rhyme..being a Mom for ..oh.. sooo many years..I am rather used to such questios...some answers just spurted out..some simmered..others are still brewing within..LOL!!
Great write..really enjoyed it Sandy..ty!

vesna *smile*

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Wonderful write...filled with the speculation of wonder...well done.
Allen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Neat poem Sandy, enjoyed reading it. cheers G

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

nice write

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

Excellent rhyme.

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

DAMN! WHY DIDN"T I WRITE THAT?

heehe
that's so great, wonderful, marvelous, witty, stupendous, amazing, and clever and cute!
bravo,
yay! yay!
standing ovation!

jessica
aka
gypsie
p.s. i like it

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

but mama why? how many times have i heard that one...and wondered what the answer was

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

interesting write, sandy, and so true! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx, friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

(((sandy)))

thought provoking, humorous write with no real answers...but i love the ending

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

What's good about good-bye? LOL English is one crazy mixed up language.... I suppose one should wonder about those who get round it so easily!
Thanks

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on January 5, 2004

Loved this. It read just like a riddle with rhyme. Well done.
Amor