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The Way of Water
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Thoughts on life and death...the ways of water and loss


 

 

 

The Way of Water



"Silent watchman on the wall
beam a hand's breadth from me now
scorch of gaze forsaking sleep
radiant brand to char my brow
fire by night I plead release
how you press me, how I bow."



           ~~~~



Ink to hand & mist in a swirl
of coming dawn--
a baptism worthy
(the interminable black
of water)
to soften blood
           just below form

Water knowing water
blood bidding blood
the way it wills

The flip of motion
in a thoat-rattled sigh
to swallow itself Whole

For only Light has more power
& cruel knowing--
Silent Watcher
          of the way of water,

the cry of blood,
its boundless thirst calling up from the earth--
          Naming holiness
from ashes--

Blood-hunger for  
           level
its ruined softness, the tendered places--
Purity in stillness

& the caved lips of
sleep.







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 Reviews of "The Way of Water "
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Powerful spiritual imagery here Pataliyah. You write with a penchant towards surrealism, and what you are conveying is not readily understood without meditation. Whether it was intended or not, "and the caved lips of sleep" is as good a description of death as I've ever read. You are gifted!
Be blessed
Richard

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
The Light always brightens up all corners and recesses !
Peter


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