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What´s wrong?
by Unnur Sólrún Bragadóttir → (All Poetry by Unnur Sólrún Bragadóttir)
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In the snow I found footprints

that someone had left for me

to walk.



By the river I found a mountain

that someone had left for me

to climb.


In the mailbox I found bills

that someone had left for me

to pay.


But nowhere I find the man

that someone left for me

to love.



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 Reviews of "What´s wrong?"
Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Everything's right about "What's Wrong," a very delightful and enjoyable prose. Made me laugh and me cry; hope you find your beau. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
climb the mountain someone left for you, pay the bills that were delivered to you, love you can only find by yourself ...

i enjoyed the logic and concept of this poem ...

Reviewed by Unnur Bragadóttir
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
My holy. Thank you so much for your support. You have given me such a treasure, such a feed back - May every minute sing for you in silent. I know of course my English must be a bit clumsy, but what´s perfect in life? Thank you, thank you.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
I know that of which you speak! Great poem...

Susan

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Funny and beautiful at the same time, Unnur! I am a big fan of snow and the scandinavian countries so this poem fell like a crystal into my lap. Best wishes kenny

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Keep writing poetry like this and soon that someone wil find you.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Welcome to Authors Den

I like your poem,
good observations

keep looking.........maybe he is under that snow, and you will find him come the spring thaw

pax A

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Such a plea. Great build up to it too.

Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Aaaawwwww! I think the man will be here very soon!!!!!...Just seek and yee shall find!!!!!

Wonderful write!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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