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Good Knight
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Part one

 

Good Knight
By H.J. Cruz
 
Please mum, give up the good knights tale,
I’ll record on parchment wit quill O-quail.
Oh lad not again, my bleeding heart’s yet to mend.
Yes mum once again, for the sake of a scriveners pen!
 
The silver haired widow stooped over her stew,
Eyes glazed over whilst stirring her brew.
A crackling hearth with fire untamed,
With ladle to lips her memories came.
 
One frosty morn fields shrouded in mist
A rider appeared on crusade to enlist,
Pa-pa at the ready now greeted with scythe
A weary young knight who called himself Seth.
 
As I peered from the loft upon ebony steed
The noble atop offered silver for feed,
In a flurry I dressed with the prowess of youth
Lest he gaze upon this maiden uncouth.
 
As Pa-pa took the stallion to stable
He yelled orders to come set the table,
A knock at the door caused me to cringe
My hair was a nest, a deviless singe.
 
A rap at the door; a saddle nosed wench,
I wondered what thirst I posed to quench,
The door now swung open, oh what a sight
Shrouded in mud; mailed covered might.
 
With helmet in hand he greeted with bow,
The stench could stampede even our cow.
Weapons outside while I fetch a pale.
Not to trouble my lady, I’d rather have ale.
 
Aye,
Ale for the toil and a pale for the soil,
Separate the prince from the peat, then you’ll eat!
Forgive me; I have been long on the road,
Sleeping in thickets amongst vermin and toad.
 
Seated now slurping soup of venison,
Heretofore, heedless prime for Saracens,
Shalt I quest aft blood royals imagination,
An ale pouring stoop brandishing just compensation.
 
With boiled-brain eyes he beseechingly checked
Thine wholesome appendages, the alabaster neck,
His matted, haughty head now in wretched swain
For sensuous lips, saphire eyes cloaked in crimson mane.
 
Pa-pa, do come to aid our young lord, I say
He’s landed face first in his ill-gotten soup for pay,
Whilst woefully quick to remove to a trestle flock bed,
Exclaims; thou canst afford rent iffen he’s found dead.
 
Now then let he be still with slumber,
A gallant Knights snore tears oak to lumber,
I’ll naught furget the look upon our squire
The bed she gave weigh now kindling for fire.
Yet it never dawned on our good knight!
 
To be continued…
 
                                                    Copyright
                                                      H.J. Cruz
                                                         3/08

 

 


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 Reviews of "Good Knight"
Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on January 14, 2009
Had a good vision day today and found I could see this. A most enjoyable read and I for one love series poetry. Will be back to enjoy the others. Kathy

Reviewed on May 31, 2008
My Sir, You tell a wise wisdom filled tail!
Love your style H J
Glad you are back, recharged and ready to go wild! I see...
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Lady -She-xoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
A good beginning here...I always raise an eye brow when I hear someone say they wished they lived back in those days. For many reasons but the thought and how true of how a small cabin table would smell like in a sort time when such a knight "dropped" in. Lady J

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Welcome back and wow what a come back!
Love the vividness and imagery
Anxiously awaiting continuation!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Very interesting tale all brought to life, well told....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on March 10, 2008
A wondrous tale Sir Honey Jam, we anxiously await the next part!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Well you got my attention for sure...looking forward to next installment.

Fee

Reviewed on March 10, 2008
I like this "Good Knight".

Appreciatively,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
When there were towers with fair maidens to free and dragons to slain, when the one on black armour was the bad dude and the one in shining armour on a white horse was the one getting the girl.
But, one can't just start a story and let the readers hanging like wet blankets in the wind...how many girls the dude in the white horse gets??????????????????

Georg

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
Excellent writing,stay safe and well sweet man...Hugssssssssss

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
Wonderful, looking forward to more. Tom

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
Renaissance Festival in Larkspur this June, could use a Good Knight! It's time for a good joust and a turkey leg to absorb the grog. I love this style prose/poem/storytelling. This would be wonderful illustrated, H.J...continue, cruise on Cruz...be well my Colorado neighbor...see you at Donkey Derby Days in Cripple Creek in full armor and brass spittoon...

Warmly,
Sage

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
H.J.,

Enjoyed and delightful.

Good voice - I know that was some work.

~D.


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