A Lesson Unlearned (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2009

You need to be careful in choosing your friends.
I chose myself long time ago..:)

Jerry

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

GOOD WRITE WITH THE PHRASES THAT PAINT A VIVID IMAGERY OF ONE MAKING EVERY ATTEMPT TO 'FORGET'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on March 18, 2007

I like this very much. Best wishes Dave

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Thank you for sharing your wit, Lori. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 9, 2006

Hahaha, love this

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 9, 2006

This is pure genius, Lori. I love it!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

lol lovely! food acts as a standin for emotional highs and lows sometimes, and you get that reality across very clearly, here! loved the beefeater line! i thought they weren't supposed to smile!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

I agree with Joselyn.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Ahh the sound of Bow Bells. Gotta keep yer head on..
Like you I'm a sucker for pretty labels, well pretty anything I guess.
Chipper write... Any coffee choc's Send this way... If yer find 'em!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Hahahahahaha...I may never get over this one.
Perfect ! Love it!!!

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Great stuff Lori..Happy New Years to you and I am happy to see that you are doing good!.............Robin

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

i like
the way you read
labels
and if i
were one
i would be
an Arabian

lol

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Like the sense of humor and the creative play on labels.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

LUV sense of humor, Lori ;)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Hahahaha...you go girl...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Oh Lori you do so have a way with the words and this play on friendship of the vices really brought them out. Well done sweetie.

Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Gotta love it!!!!!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Yes Lori, Bottoms up...giggle. I agree with Sage, but I think it is too funny. Made me laugh. Also Lori thnx for the review of A Wandering Soul. I had just posted it...giggles again. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, maybe too stubborn for my own good, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and very terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Bottoms up, Lori! Ooops! The Godiva popped out! Funny poem! Keep them coming!

Sage

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

hahaha -- good shot, Lori. Very funny.

Carmen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Too funny, Lori. Chocolate is the best vice. The only real hangover we get from it is centered near our belt.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

A woman's true curse LOL. Great write.