The Hiding Place (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 30, 2010

THIS IS SO GUT WRENCHINGLY SAD...AND AS LONG AS THE 'CHILD' DOESN'T HIDE TOO LONG...FOR ONE HAS TO COME OUT, AS DIFFICULT AS IT MAY BE, AND WITH GOD'S HELP, PRESS ON. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Jesus, that's powerful! Amazingly moving. I'm sorry............

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

Stunning poem, Lori!! Tragic, evil, but words can help one through the worst of times. Peace.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Excellent write, liked this one

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 10, 2004

Lori...insightful write!!!!

Reviewed by Joe McCarthy (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Some people hide. Others run. I do both.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Lori, You can make it through it and survive. It is hellish but you are better for it in the end. I ought to know, I have been through it myself! Christ is the answer through all of this.Becca

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2004

Lori, so much pain for a beautiful Lady. Let Jesus carry your burden and free yourselef from this Shadow figure, and it will work out ok. Bill

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on March 6, 2004

Shadow men hurt grown folk too, not just little girls ...
Great poemn written wioth tremendous style!
~~~favorite lines:
leaving nestling daughters in violent shades of shame
left to clean the bloody mess that tears cannot explain
--- too awesome for words - well done!

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on March 6, 2004

This is life unfortunately. It happens more then one wants to imagine. (HUGS)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

"free from the words and scars of life that shadow men can give"
Powerful verse. Deeply meaningful and moving. Thank you for sharing this offering, Lori. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

Profound and extremely insightful!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

Unique Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

Lori this evoked so many feelings in me..
Sorrow...sadness...horror...and outright
ANGER....so glad you are writing....releasing..
it is healing...and helps me to understand..
this was powerful...great writing..Brava to you..
floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

Lori,
"When dreams forsake the solitude of divine imagination
and the spark of life is left to die in the heart of the forsaken
a child can find that hidden place where childlike themes can live
free from the words and scars of life that shadow men can give
This is so powerful and the depth it is unreachable...

Peggy

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

"The Hiding Place" is a composition poemized from emotions and facts of life felt by a heart that has a knowledgeable mind, and written with words that warn, instruct and delight the souls searching for wisdom.

I have enjoyed a masterpiece, and learned from a scholarly poetical writing.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

You have the most incredible mind Lori
I believe your work is before your time..
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

This is far and beyond one of the best poems.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

O' Ouststanding and deeply moving write Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

"When dreams forsake the solitude of divine imagination
and the spark of life is left to die in the heart of the forsaken
a child can find that hidden place where childlike themes can live
free from the words and scars of life that shadow men can give
."--
DYNAMITE!!!! Poem of the day...in my opinion...

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

Excellent write..brutal message. Thanks for posting Lori..Lisa

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

An excellent write Lori, keep up the great work...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

This was outstanding Lori, Excellent and so deeply moving,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

Splendid writing Lori, for such a sorrowful topic.
One day it will all be beautiful as He promised,
that is our hope,and I believe in it!