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A PUZZLING ROMANCE
by Micki Peluso → (All Poetry by Micki Peluso)
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This is another poem from a prompt, using the words,rubik's cube, demonized and carrot. It turned out pretty good considering those words!!

 

A PUZZLING ROMANCE

Caitlin with the carrot-colored hair
Went off to visit a witch so fair.
Seeking help, her problem, profound.
The witch’s familiar was a Basset Hound!

“What? No black cat?” Caitlin asked.
“Sadly, my cat was possessed! Aghast,
A corrupt thing, most surely demonized.
So I changed her into this hound so fine.”

“What, my sweet,might I do for you?”
While cooing to her grey morning dove.
“I have looked far and wide,” the lass replied.
“But cannot find my one true love.”

The witch rose to stir her cauldron stew
Dug deep into a magical, tapestry bag
And handed Caitlin a rubic’s cube
Which made the lovelorn girl quite mad!

“I beseech your help and receive a toy?”
“Ah, my beauty, it will bring you joy.
” For when solved, the rubic’s squares,
Will bring the one for whom you care.”

The witchcraft worked on the very first try,
As Caitlin sat alone in the park.
A handsome, dark-eyed man ambled by
And made a quizzical remark.

“Excuse me Miss,” he said and sat
Beside her on the wooden bench.
“You seem to need a hand with that.”
His eyes took in the lovely wench.

Moments passed with no retreat,
As he twisted, turned, then it was done.
The rubic’s cube was now complete
Caitlin sighed, her heartstrings sung.


Far in the distance howled a sound
From a most special Basset Hound.
The witch pulled up her blood-red cowl
And smiled; true love once more, found.


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Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on December 3, 2011
My Dear Micki,
You posted this piece over three years ago, and I'm just now paying a visit? Shame on me.

But knowing a little of the long-term romance in your life, your title of "A Puzzling Romance" puzzled me. Yes, I was right. This isn't autobiographical. But it is a delight. I read your words with my eyes even as I voiced it with my mouth, and it was fun, fun, fun.

You are such a wonderful writer as well as a truly lovely lady.

With respect, love and all best wishes,
Richard

Reviewed by Mary Jones
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
i love your words, they in themselves are like magic and what a mind to go along, i look forward to another charm
love and hugs
mary etta

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
You did a great job with such a challenge, Micki. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on August 31, 2008
Oh, this is great!!! Micki, I'm so glad I'm reading your work today. I love it!!!!! So sorry it has taken me such a long time to come to read you.

I have two ID's here in the den, one is:

http://www.authorsden.com/sandiemayangel
(this one)

and the other one is:

http://www.authorsden.com/sandiemayangeljoyce

Both these ID's are mine, so sometimes, you might get the comments from the other ID as well.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on August 23, 2008
Very good writing here, a good muse of strange love, but love none the less!

Reviewed by Patricia Guthrie
Reviewed on August 23, 2008
This was a cute poem. Poetry is the devil to write. Congratulations

Patricia A. Guthrie
Author of "In the Arms of the Enemy" 2007


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