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Diabetic Dream...
by Lavendar Jazz → (All Poetry by Lavendar Jazz)
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Poking fun at being diabetic... I have lived with it for 24 years... Just waiting for a cure.

 

Diabetic dream…
 
What am I to do
with a diabetic body
and a junk food
heart…
it spelled destruction
right from the start.
 
My thoughts turned
to cinnamon buns
and apple pie dreams
with thick rich
butter pecan ice cream.
 
I thought of pound cakes
with double butter and
cheese cakes with
chocolate on top
Mmmm... I better
stop.
 
 Its hard to resist
chicken dipped
battered and fried
being diabetic
I almost cried.
 
Sweet potato soufflé
fried okra and such
all the foods
I love so much.
 
…back to reality
I woke from my dream
checked by blood glucose
and yes it was high
there goes my chance
for apple pie.
 
© Lavendar Jazz   2008

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 Reviews of "Diabetic Dream..."
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 31, 2011
In the grand scheme, I am just a baby regards being a diabetic, since July of 2009 when my sugar went so high I was found lying on the ground outside my camper, naked, in a high sugar induced coma...That aside, finally, I have been keeping an eye on my sugar level, but damned if I can figure out why it bounces from like 150 up to over 200 over night, I DO eat the wrong things, but only in moderation as I have been told by other diabetics I know...I too am awaiting with bated sugar breath for a cure...I enjoyed this write, Jazz...Ed

Reviewed by Jackson Aniefiok
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Nice poem, there are many people out there in this condition, it the society common problem, but my advise is that you are not alone, always draw your strength from God.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Hey I am with you on this one as I too am Diabetic Lavender Thank you for dropping by to visit me and letting me know you are here. A great write and thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by H Manogue
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Not only is this a great poem, it should be the words of a song!
I appreciate your work Lavender.
Hal

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
I LOVED this!!! My Mom is borderline diabetic so i read this aloud to her and she loved it too, you are a really good writer, I always enjoy your poems. Blessings to you, Michelle

Reviewed on April 8, 2008
I love this piece. I was having visions of these treats while reading. Nice work.

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on April 7, 2008
You have a wonderful sense of humor, Lavendar. When you can poke fun at yourself, I'd say your feet are on solid ground. Funny, I heard that Cinnamon...not the kind you buy at the supermarket...but the real stuff you find in the health-food shop, is supposed to be excellent. Have you tried that? That's it for advice...great write...

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 7, 2008
You are funny, it is always good to laugh at ourselves, shows the kind of person you are, you are a darling.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 6, 2008
it's healthy to laugh...this was clever

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2008
drink lavendar twice a day and it will make no difference...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
oh my Jazz! I'm diabetic too, for only two years, but I've found out it is an insidious monster! I have many other problems including heart, but I detest most the diabetes! So I can relate 100 percent to this poem!;-)Thanks for sharing!...ET

Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Love this! My mother was a diabetic and I can hear her say these words as well. A difficult disease to deal with in our world as it is today. Very creative!

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
This poem caught my attention with its title. My younger sister has had diabetes for about 45 years. She developed it when she was eleven or twelve. She loves to bring desserts to our family gatherings though she doesn't eat them. They're always the richest desserts, too. - David

Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Lost my mother to diabetes - nothing to mess 'round with. :( Keep on keeping on, smiling through it all. Well written, Lavendar!

(((HUGS))) an dlove, Karla.

Reviewed by J. Evans
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
This poem hit home. I too, am diabetic. Wonderful poem.

J. Earl Evans

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
As a diabetic for 5 years, I can certainly identify. Well written.

Larry

Reviewed on April 4, 2008
There's nothing funny about being diabetic, but I am glad to see your humor shining through. Good on you, Lavander!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Excellent write!


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