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Kacie R Rahm

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Optimist
by Kacie R Rahm → (All Poetry by Kacie R Rahm)
  
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When I weep,
I do not shed tears,
I shed weight off my shoulders,
I shed all of my fears.

When I scream,
I don't wear out my voice,
I wear out the feelings,
That keep me from rejoice.

When I whisper,
I do not tell secrets,
I tell myself that,
This must be as good as it gets.

When I look,
I do not see the world,
I see the perceptions,
Of a little girl.

When I speak,
I do not complain,
I tell those that are grim,
To welcome the rain.

When I write,
I do not think,
I just write,
And breathe, and blink.

When I finish,
I am not too bored to go on,
It just means there are no lyrics,
Left to my song.

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 Reviews of "Optimist"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2003
Kaci, I really liked this! The last two stanzas are my favourites. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
I really enjoyed your use of repetition, I love rhyme when it is done well. Great write. Mal.

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Kaci,I love this one, great write, keep it up gurly!
~Kari~

Reviewed by Sarah Mathews (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2003
great poem kc, even though i'm not sure what an optimist is I think ur poem helped me get an idea!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 24, 2003
Excellent write from you...BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
i like your sense of optimism...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
Nicely done.
~E

Reviewed by Kelie Urbanec (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
Kaci,
Beautifully written. You tell how it is. Your own way. Great poem!!!
~Kelie~

Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
Hey I have a challenge! I would like pessimist's, optimists, Sadistics, and those who are all around to wrte a poem about what they do not do and what they do to replace that. It should be fun!

Reviewed by Frater Kaos (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
that was great! (and this is coming from a pessimist...heh)


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