I want to feel your hands,
Your mouth,
Your teeth,
Your breath,
The essence of you upon me
I want you to feel my hands,
My mouth,
My teeth,
My breath,
The essence of me upon you
I feel desirous, wanton, and meek
When you are beside me
I feel like a Goddess, made of liquid desire,
When you are inside me
Coaxing everything out of me
With your sweet whispers
Telling me I’m beautiful
With your whole being
Through your eyes I am everything
I’m learning to love
I’m falling too far
If I’m dreaming, don’t wake me
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Reviews of "Don't Wake Me"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2003
Great works !!!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
oooooooo... gettin' sexy, are we? but thats where the magic is.. write it.. own it! This is very sensuous.. good job! katy.
Reviewed by Jim Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2002
I'd like to see you stay with the five line stanza form. It seemed like each stanza needed one more verse to be complete. The first two stanzas really set the poem up well.
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
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Okay, it's just me who's thinking like this, don't take my words for it. It's your teeth and his teeth.
Sandie Angel :o)