Little Knee (poem) by Daniel S. McTaggart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

At first I was getting frustrated reading this-- the overly obvious rhymes, the backwards wording (I hate that...)... but anyhow, I now see what this is about. It's fun. Great subtle slam at over- sentimentality. There is a lot of that- that goes on here, but you're very clever in conveying it. Mine of this nature is: "Cow Ditty"... only I didn't mess with diction-- this grammar queen just can't bring herself to do it. --Charlie

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on February 25, 2005

Oh Danny.....

....only you ;) yet so sweet and very effective. Great write.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 15, 2005

Sweet! Hehehee.
You know when I wrote my poem "Alien Invasion," I was sitting in the Pizza Hut with my crazy children and it was way too noisy. Thought about you and your people observation poems and grabbed my daughter's notebook. ;-)

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

lol
this is so cute
enjoyed the "little knee" memory

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 9, 2005

Delightful. Almost reads like a nursery rhyme. Thank you, Daniel. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 9, 2005

Hahahahaha...maybe that was why she hurt her knee...the urge to pee...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

this is an enchanting write...thank you for sharing

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

You just had to wait till she picked you up, didn't you? I will never try to pick you up if I ever meet you for damn sure...Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

an adorabls silly write, that just squeezes the mothers heart with
doting love for her little charmer;-)I know you touched mine;-)

etw

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

This is a real mother and I am glad that you had that type of mother. They are wonderful like that aren't they?

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Oh, how I could see that little red head as the smile of relief brightened your sweet face. (wink) Ah, my dear DannyMac... all the best mommys wear pee, kinda like their scent, when we're young and we hurt our 'little knee'... I laughed but I also shed a bitty tear, for the mind picture of my sweet friend when teeny. (smile) katydid xox

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Aw, jeez. I think I needed that.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

funny and cute, thanks for sharing! LOL well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Just like Karla, thanks for the smile...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

To pee or not not to pee?

Nice one..

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Daniel,

Hee hee--oops! An accident, I'm sure.

Adorable write--enjoyed--thanks for the smile. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

HO HO! Tricked her with the Little Knee, Gotta Pee Routine, hey. Bad Boy!