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If There Were No Dreams
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* Land of the muse challenge:
To use the phrase: “If there were no dreams”




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If There Were No Dreams



If there were no dreams,
Think of how it would be,
How could we live,
If yesterday was all there was?

Life is a challenge,
Filled with despair and pain,
But we can dream of a better life,
Of deep forests with crystal streams,
Or watching the moon rise,
With someone by our side…

We hold these thoughts in our hearts,
It gives us strength to face the day.
At night when our hearts are weary,
And the world has worn us down,
I close my eyes and think of you,
And the love I have found…

We live in different worlds you and I,
But I dream of one day sharing the same sky,
And though you may make another your bride,
In my dreams it is I!

Oh at night when I finally close my eyes,
I am living a different life!
Last night I was dancing in the snow,
Under the soft moonlight’s gentle glow;

And I was not cold.

Baby I need you to know,
Tomorrow is all I have,
And those dreams may come true ,
How could I live if I could not dream of you?


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 Reviews of "If There Were No Dreams"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
You do beautiful work.

Elizabeth

Reviewed on March 26, 2006
It is always good to have dreams; Whenever there's dreams, there is hope.

A good write of sentiments with a sound message.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
Without dreams Reindeer we would have to retreat into insanity.
This poem is beautifully expressed
Ian

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 21, 2006
a beautiful dream song of life's possibilities ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2006
Cannot imagine not having dreams! Enjoyed the concept of this write.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2006
Baby I need you to know,
Tomorrow is all I have,
And those dreams may come true ,
How could I live if I could not dream of you?

..I love your work..it always touches my soul..

Vesna

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2006
such a beautiful and gentle write, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 19, 2006
dreams like this are the reason why we live, i think, double lives. the lives that go on whilst we sleep, and those we live during waking hours. they compliment each other, i think, and, sometimes, intersect in the world of our creation in that moment between waking and sleep, when everything is possible, and not only possible, but probable. a soulful write, sista.

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 19, 2006
A philosophically romantic and romantically inspiring write. Wonderful to read these lines a few times over and appreciate them for their different aspects.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 19, 2006
Reindeer, this poem sings in my heart! So beautifully written with exquisite expression! A gem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
Sweeeeet...

Felix

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
Beautifully expressed, Retta. And you are so right; where would we be without dreams? Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
Beautiful Retta! Dream on!

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
Simply beautiful Retta, pulsating longing and yearning delivered in an unobstructed flow of emotion. Love it.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
Most beautiful Retta!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
beautiful. well said.
TX

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Sooooo pretty, Reindeer! What a beauty this poem is and you are so right, where would we be if yesterday is all that there was?
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Beautifully written. Dreams are what keep me going too.

Best wishes,

Mary

Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Reindeer,

Sumptious poetry...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
The poem was excellent ...

The last 4 lines where so touching ...

Nice write keep it up ...

Thanks


Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
This is touching, emotive and achingly beautiful, Retta...Wonderful work.

D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Dreams are as good, if not better than the real thing Retta !
For in reality, it is almost impossible for someone or something to live up to our estimations or wishes !
Hold on to those positive and vibrant dreams forever, dear friend !
Peter

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
The yearning is, at times, almost as good as the real thing.
Dreams make it so... if we're willing to allow them.
Good pen here. Soft, lilting, dreamy. Near perfection.
- Bill

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Gotta love it! Dreams are good, even though some of these dreams advance into nightmares, dreams of bettering oursdelves and find true love is good, it continually gives us hope.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Our dreams are as close as the stars. They hold them with quiet fire and reflect them back to us. Soft as a sigh, Retta. Yes, how would we live without dreams? Lin

Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Dreams are the spices of romantic life. Unless we dream we can not even invent new technologies. Beautiful poem

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
What a marvelous poem, Reindeer; you have truly risen to the challenge here. And life truly would be quite miserable - without our many dreams.


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