Flash of Joy
I felt a twinkle of joy today.
Was it brought on by the Rufous Hummingbird
chirping at its reflection in my window?
The radiantly coloured fountain of flowers
pouring from the hanging basket by the door?
The sweet scent of cedar
lingering in the mid summer air?
The gentle touch of morning sun
on jewelled dew laden grasses?
The ethereal song of a Swainson's Thrush
descending from a nearby stately hemlock?
The giddy greeting of a Black-Capped Chickadee
calling from the nearby emerald holly tree?
The soaring Red-tailed Hawk
Seeking awakening thermals?
And so much, so much more...?
No.
What made my heart flutter
like the wings of the swallow-tailed butterfly
flitting over the gaudy hydrangeas by the fence
was none of those wonders.
It was a wish of seeing you today
that sadly, swiftly faded like a soundless sigh.
© Copyright 2010 Regis Auffray
Rebecca💌
Love ya!
Jane
Daniel
Excellent mon ami.
Love Emile
hug
kathi
that sadly, swiftly faded like a soundless sigh."
My goodness, this was lovely, and oh so wistful. You get better and better every day Reg. Such a pleasure.
Love you...
as I always do dear & sweet friend
I will be in Canada in September for my birthday!
BIG SMILE!!!
Love & See You Soon ;)
Vickie
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Love,
Sage
Ron
filled with fantastic imagery
Peace & Joy on to you
William
Thanks for sharing and for caring!
Much Love,
Margaret
Sheila
John
Love & hugs,
Barbie
PS: I am not at my home computer but using a patient loaner laptop #20 at Munson Medical Center, in Traverse City. Michigan. I am having a stent put in my heart tomorrow (today) at 11 am. I ghave been here a week and went through all kinds of tests, but if everythibg goes well I should be home by Sunday.
I know that you have decided to punctuate this poem and grammatically it seems correctly done but for some reason I am not a fan of all those question marks. I find them distracting somehow. Not distracting to the point where the read is interrupted or made less enjoyable, but just somehow distracting.
Content-wise it is an incredible poem. It's got great imagery and plenty of emotion. And just when I think this poem is entirely dedicated to nature there is a twist in the end. Very effectively done.
The flow is as smooth as a gentle stream on a warm spring day. Such a treat to read this poem. Pure enjoyment. I think it is one of your best!
Lena
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Cheers,
Dan
Blessings,
Christine
"swiftly faded like a soundless sigh" Perfectly descriptive of the humbleness of love.
And beautiful!!
Please write more POETRY...! ;) Your terrific at it!
Your friend,
Michelle l Schaeffer
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God bless,
Lew
Mamta
Bless you Regis,
David
Then you abruptly drop us back down
Back to reality.
Written in tears
Sadly you expose
Everyone has those fears.
Donna
This is so sad yet so beautiful. Fantastic write.
Mary
How lovely...certainly speaks well of Summer and then ...
Sadly, swiftly faded away....
Very nice...Sudo Nym ~ Poet in Motion
Peace,
Dayvid
I so relate.
John