Wish (poem) by Regis Auffray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on January 18, 2024

OR...THAT PERHAPS, SHE HAD BEEN DIFFERENT, YES? ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS...!!!!! ENJOYED, MY FRIEND. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by lois christensen

Reviewed on August 17, 2014

What is got out of this - you wouldn't wish to know!

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2010

The expressions of colors and the writings emotional points hash very well--very creative! You must have studied fine art or been involved in fine art at one time or another. The writing is excellent, as well as the use of the symbolism of colors. Thanks for another great writing, Regis. Great expression!

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Reviewed on September 9, 2009

Oh no Regis,
A mon avis, tu es parfait, ne change pas!
Nicole

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on November 28, 2008

Regis,

Great image; imagery at its' best . . . !!

Best regards,

Lance

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

Regis,
I am endeavored! With The Chill Of Emotional Bonds That Only Woman Can Give.

Love & Hugs
Embraced~Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

Regis,
Amazing imagery in this piece. You have artfully woven nature to describe the beauty you see. Nicely penned.
Sheila

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Don't we all wish that ... from time to time :)? Catching up with your work, Regis. As irresistable as always :)!

Sandy

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 7, 2006

Alot to the imagination REg. Great Poem! Great feelings throughout! shared with well meaning desires of TWO and you! :) WArm HuGs, Sheeeoxo

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

This is sweet, a beautiful write,
Love and Peace, B&R

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

This is deep and full of emotion. Kudos to you my friend.

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

The word caught my eye...Wish! Flashes...Emotions...Good Write!
Peace&Grace!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

Reg,

I found 'Wish' on your site map. Of course you wish you had been born different ... just for a moment I think! Woman to woman passion! Just as you say it, Reg. When you say "I saw you waltz across the wide expanse of emerald lawn," metaphorically, I AM THERE ... that wide bushy triangle patch of her grass that I am mowing her down with my tongue! Yes ... my toe has been on THAT line! The artwork enhances your poem. Her name is 'DESIRE.' I know her well ... she is the goddess that you say. Thanks for reminding me, Reg.

your literary comrade,

Sage

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 11, 2005

OMG regis this is soooooo beautiful. I wish that a man was holding my hand on such a beautiful day, and saying soothing words to me, and laughing and romping. OMG, what a beautiful, picturesque story, in poetic form, you have painted here. Thnx for sharing Regis. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

The imagery in this poem was awesome, as was the idea behind it. It paints the picture of the moment very well.

M.Rose

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

LOL--YOOOOOU! You are so naughty...tsk, tsk, tsk ;) I think that too sometimes when I see two really hot men...that kiss. You rock! ROF! Loved it!

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2003

Your poetry has true creativity and inspiring is your versatility in writing.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

J'aime ce po�me!
Une bonne id�e d'utiliser des couleurs differentes.
Parfait!
Nico

Reviewed by S H (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

That was beautiful!

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

clever, imaginative, and lovely

Reviewed by Louise Bohmer (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

I loved the use of color, mixed with your poem's smooth lilting lines, to convey such deep range of emotion.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Beautiful poem, sweet friend. Never change..
We wouldn't want you any different.

Huggs, *Linda*

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Very very good

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Oh Regis I like you just the way you are! :O)
<Sigh> This is soooo romantic till that OUCHER of a ending!
A wonderful creative write!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Very colorful and unique
The ending made me say ouch

peace

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Truly beautiful and quite imaginative use of color. Loved it!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

you are an extrememly colorful poet both in content and context, of course you were born different...

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

Hi Regis,
Well I found my way here so I can't be that daft.
Tell you what that is a fine hair cut, that would have scared the wits out of any Roman, we just jumped up on Hadrains Wall and showed our backsides it worked just as well.
Back to the poem,
One of the few benefits of getting older, is that we sometimes get wiser too,understanding the complexities of human nature is one of those benefits.
I think you have mapped out in this poem an excellent case for better understanding.
Well Done.
Oirdheirc Mor

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

Exceptional heart touching write....wonderful picture....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

LOL yup what a waste, great to read, love the way you made useage of the colours, well done.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 19, 2003

09:23 GMT.
>>>>>>>> < < < < < < < <

GREETINGS TO ALL.
>>>>>>>>>> < < < < < < < < < <

"Wish"... Poet, this is what I call "a celestial feast".

Healthy Happy Day!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

LOL oh well...dicks happen!

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Why would you ever want to be born different? Be happy with who you are, which is wonderful, which is the way God wants you to be. Fantastic sentiments expressed here.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Cleverly constructed, very enjoyable, and colourful :) I LIKED

:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

A beautifully crafted poem and open perspective. I love this
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Beautifully flowing, gentle verses spiralling down to a very painful conclusion. Very well done.

Carmen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

"You wore a sapphire sky
In the indolent air of aging June"

regis your lines are so beautiful and expressive....lovely lovely work....floria
thanks for the kind words on my page.....

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Lovely. Never thought I'd say I agree with the sentiments here but, I do. Felt that way once myself. Still do. :)

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Interesting perspective, and worded with a longing ache that touches the heart and soul. Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Beautiful wishing Regis

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Wishes...wishes...How I wish for this and that everyday. Thanks for the well written lines.

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Hear my applause for words well spun ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

A thought provoking beauty Regis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Very beautiful tribute to the ladies. I like this one. It is emotional longing and ( wink) wishful thinking.

Susan

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Regis, I really enjoyed this write... I love the different perspectives that writing allows us... very well done....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

I enjoy reading when the mind is allowed to be seen in its many perspectives. This is well crafted and opens thought patterns.Beautifully written Regis!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Regis,

Wonderfully expressed, and beautifully written.

Sheila

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Regis this one is a beautiful write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

A fascinating perspective, Regis!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Great write!