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Hang On
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Hang On

High on a mountain his head in the clouds,
An old tree was standing so bold and so proud.
He could see everything from his place up so high,
And he had seen more than a century go by.

But so many years of storms and high wind,
Have weakened the tree and he’s starting to bend.
He thought “I’ve been here so long, and my times up I know,
It’s time I just fall to the ground and let go”.

But before he let go he took a good look around,
And for once in his life the old tree looked down.
He had always looked out with his head in the sky,
Looking down he saw something he had not realized.

All tangled up in his old but strong limbs,
There were so many other trees leaning on him.
They had fell into him during storms in the night,
Now he’s all that they have to hold them upright.

When the old tree saw this he saw things differently,
I didn’t realize so many depended on me.
With his pride renewed, he thought with a smile,
“Perhaps it is best I just stand here awhile”.

Jack Roberts – September 24 2002

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 Reviews of "Hang On"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 20, 2003
wish i wrote it

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
splendid write Jack!!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Wisdom, in rhyme!

Reviewed by Mary Cannon (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
Well Dear Jack I am left without words
this is truly a piece written with much
wisdom and insight. a very good read, keep
on writing....

Love Mary

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2003
You just keep bringing forth such wonder Jack...Great stuff indeed....Ty, Dani

Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Wow..beautiful, deep, and so inspiring..
Lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
This was incredible!!! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
:) I am awed with this write, Jack... You have a beautiful mind.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Jack, this poem is just what I needed today. It reminded me of all those who need me to stay. God must have been listening to me and sent your poem to answer my prayer. Thank you!

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Good poem as per usual but this one has a special message.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
A beautiful poem Jack. Very inspiring.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Thoughtful. Reminds me of Methusala.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Outstanding Jack...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Outstanding, my friend..
One of your best.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
A very nice write Jack

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Wonderful! I enjoyed this so much...

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
We all need something to hold on to. Lovely and deep poem.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Eileen makes an excellent point. Enjoyed reading this. ~Joseph

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Fantastic metaphor Jack seniors get the notion they are not needed, this is the kind of encouragement they need! You ought to send it to a publisher of a seniors mag or somewhere...Fine work!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2003
Jack,
So beauiful, inspiring write.
Peg


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