Oh Jack....what a poem and pic!! This is truly a keepsake. You are both ver lucky. Best of luck to the happy couple..
Jenni
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Yes, I sometimes wonder myself where time has gone. I still recall the time my daughter was a baby - and now she is almost ready to leave us. We have to accept it, that's life.
Nico
This is such a touching write, you have me crying here. It's just the thought of giving, give, give, give (something about that word) your precious child to someone? You're a good Daddy and I can see the tears on your daughter's face that reflect her happiness as she dances in her Daddy's arms.
Congratulations Jack. She's lovely
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Well done.
Congrats to your daughter.
You know, it's our job to give them away -
but they always seem to come back!
lol.
-James
Jack this is so beautiful, I've got tears...The picture really completes it. What a wonderful treasure for your daughter to have as a keepsake. Your poetry is perfect for this!Congratulations to them and to the Dad and Mom!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
So heart-touching and beautiful. I'm sure that she will always cherish this.
congratulations on your daughter's getting married! what a beautiful picture of you two! how proud you must be of her! may she and her new husband have many years of happiness together! what a beautiful tribute to your newly married daughter; they sure do grow up fast, don't they? (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
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Jenni
Nico
Congratulations Jack. She's lovely
Congrats to your daughter.
You know, it's our job to give them away -
but they always seem to come back!
lol.
-James
~Joseph
Nancy
Congratulations!!!!!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
JC xoxoxo
Reindeer
this made me cry...My daughter got married almost 2 years aga...And I miss her so...she lives in England now!!
But will be coming home for Xmas!!
Love Tinka
Awwwwww Jack this is a treasure....so beautiful, so real so very you.
This is just how I feel about my Ashleigh....she may grow and find her own way....but she'll always be my blue eyed baby-girl.
The words in this poem moved me tonight......and what a lovely picture of the two of you..*sigh*
Beautifully done Jack......ty, Dani
Congratulations to your daughter and her husband. The photograph of you and her is wonderful.
~Chrissie