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Praying for Rain
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Watching from the kitchen window
She sees him standing in the field
A teardrop running down her face
For she knows how he feels

All their hopes and all their dreams
Lie just beneath the ground
And in the sky above them
A cloud cannot be found

They need a little rain

She walks out there to be with him
Looks into his troubled eyes
Looking back at her reflections of
The clear blue cloudless sky

She says “Please try not to worry
Everything will be ok”
He drops the dust that he was holding
And the wind blows it away

She’s praying for rain

As they turned in that night he said’
“ I cant take this anymore”
She said “I know it’s hard to keep the faith
When the wolves are at the door”

She said “Everything will be alright
As long as we’re together”
Come lay down here beside me
I’ll take your mind off of the weather

Praying for rain

He awoke to see the morning light
Shinning through her cotton gown
She was standing at the window
As the rain was pouring down

He got up and held her in his arms
As they watched the falling rain
The answers to her prayers
Written on the window pane

The rains finally came


© Jack Roberts – October 19, 2003


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 Reviews of "Praying for Rain"
Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Excellence in this one Jack.

Nancy

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Wonderful work, Jack. So delicate and inspiring.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Heavenly write Jack!!

Touching piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Wow Jack!!!!!

You are amazing.....this is damn fine work! ty, Dani

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Beautiful and well-written
a good story is always
wonderful to convey

thanks,
donna.

Reviewed on October 19, 2003
This was outstanding, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Jack this is superb....what would we do without rain...its our lifeline...floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
This is a stunning piece of the stuggles of life and the strength of those who live it.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Rain is life. Coincidentally, my posting (last night) is about rain as well. Soulfully expressed.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Hi Jack excellent write.
Peg

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
I enjoyed this wonderful poem and story...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Wonderful poem Jack!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Outstanding work!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Outstanding poetry, Jack! ~Z~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Jack a superb poem...Please repost this after tuesday for the
contest! It's perfect!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
A man with faith can't loose..
Perfect write Mr. Roberts
I mean Jack.........
Have a great Sunday!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Brilliant write..enjoyed the story!


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