Wonderful job, Steve!

just loved this poem, well written!

Steven,

A beautiful write, and I'm sure she'll remember you, too

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

i am sure she will remember you :-)

All I can say is WOW!
You write magnificent poetry!
How did you get to be sooo good?!?!?!
I felt very "intoxicated" while reading this poem.
It was as if you were right near me.
Weird I guess but then in another way, it was not at all.
Take care!
Becca P (Henry) Lang

I never tired or got lost in your wording......EXCellent write my friend- It's me Sheee- I do hOpe you understand my gravitation in your work styles, as I explained earlier. YOUr line - "I reach out to you again, despite my FEARS", and ""Is it too late to be FREE. I'm hoping others can and will reach out from there. *( Please do-WE Welcome YOU and all you want to share) Were all from the 1 Universe made from up above, - The Blessings are Many as we Open our Eyes and Ears to it all, around us. Listen! as they speak to you.. YOU have Opened up something here my friend, *( If I can say that, and believe that)-Listen for it and Expect it, the Universe is opening up- we won't get gobbled up by it-only join it's many revelations to it's layers. Many Inspirational words B 2 U, HuGs-Lady,Sheee

I like this kinka unorthodox poem very much. You give the reader just enough words to understand the premise but not so many that overwhelm. Good.