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Coolwater Raincicles
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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I promised Jasmin a funny photo in response to his "Ice Rain" poem. Here it is:

Photo by Captain Van


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When from the dark sky chilled rains flow

While stiff cold winds huff and blow

As dew point washes falling snow

And converts it all to ice below

 

As branches groan with weight’s despair

And power lines snap through crackling air

Roads no longer thoroughfare

The children slide without a care

 

No school today no school tomorrow

No school all week feigning sorrow

Ice Gods stopped to say hello

To paint the trees like old van Gough

 

With crystal limbs that glow at night

And leave the forest dazzling bright

That frame the deer considering flight

Ok it’s plastic please be polite

 

 

Copyright 2009 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Coolwater Raincicles"
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
:) LOL! Great last line! I really enjoyed this, Patrick, in fact, I am sitting here in the dark, smiling like a fool.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Great rhyme flow in this poem. Well done.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
And I'm sure Jasmin is lovin' it! Lovely lyrical story, Patrick.

Anna

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Stick to plastic, Patrick. Better than freezingy your butt off as I just did coming from the grocery store.

Reviewed on January 5, 2010
LOL! Patrick, you and I on the same wavelength today: BRR! It's cold.

Got to watch those icicles, they can be deadly. My Daddy once was sitting in the kitchen, in Ohio, talking to me on the phone in Texas? All of a sudden, I hear this horrible CRASH!ing sound and then, thump, thump, thump ... after a beat or two of silence, Daddy said, 'I've still got the moves, Baby, I've still got the moves.' I'm like, what the?!?? An icicle on the top of his house fell and went through the metal awning over the porch - the CRASH!ing sound. And the thump, thump, thump? Daddy sliding down the basement stairs on his belly. LOL! He'd been in Korea, guess he thought someone was shooting at him. LOL!

Well done, enjoyed this one. Stay warm, 'hear? 19 degrees here in BRRRleson, TX.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Hey! you guys, knock it off badmouthing my California Home State, the only thing around that's fake are the Chicago broads coming for silicon valleys yer nuts!

Georg


Reviewed on January 5, 2010
You rascal, but this is a great poem, despite the plastic wrap, I knew it immediatly, I knew you were up to one them Hollywood style tricks, I know, I seen them in action when I lived in L.A., driving down the freeway, there on a long patch of severely burned hot summer grass, a guy riding his horse in a cowboy outfit all bundled up like, a helicopter flying atop sprinkling miles of white confetti, it sure looked like a severe snow storm, but I also know how hot it gets there, when Jane Mansfield at the time and others, bared their boobs in full undress, at the Christmas Parade, it was hot alright, but I give a full marks for trying Patrick.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Wow - you Californians even have plastic ice! (If you need some real ice, I can send you plenty.)

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Great poem and picture Patrick...M

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Good one Pat, I shiverd as I read it.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Lovely writing, Patrick

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Cute, Patrick.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 4, 2010
You are clever dude, Patrick. Love and peace,

Regis


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