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The Day the Sky Bled Green
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Karma died and went to Hell

No one saw her go

The sky bled green to say farewell

Mother Nature’s saddest show

 

The Devil met her at the gate

Grinning from horn to horn

My eternity is your reward

Your soul has been reborn

 

Into the flames of misery

My wish is your command

Within a flash Karma replied

The devil did not understand

 

You are but an illusion

A state of Evil’s mind

Bad Karma’s here to release the grip

You have on all mankind

 

With that she took her mighty sword

And struck the Devil down

As the flames began to wither

Karma crushed his wretched crown

 

And somewhere in the Heavens

Good Karma’s smile was seen

Her alter ego gave us all a chance

The day the sky bled green

 

 

 

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 Reviews of "The Day the Sky Bled Green"
Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on September 19, 2010
how did i miss this one #.$%^&^%$#....oh m'gosh this is great! not only the message but the rythm...tempo...all of it...super kudos...

see?... a part of your head that i haven't seen...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 13, 2010
I have enjoyed your ballad of "The Day the Sky Bled Green," Patrick. Thank you for sharing this tale of good over evil. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
A legend is born.

Ron
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2010
If only Faust had read this before selling his soul. He would have gone to the gates with a nifty little blueprint and courage on his lips. A tale of justice, right versus wrong in a world sadly lacking thereof.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 11, 2010
Karma's vindicator! The bill changer at the car wash ate the greenback! The Day the Sky Bled Green is nature's way of the Equalizer and for Christ's sake, God has nothing to do with it! Sin is sin and retribution avenges the evil of religion, period! Onward and Upward...you've displayed incredible storytelling from the depths of burial, the art of petroglyphs and skyward in your most recent poetry...it's been a monumental journey of truths through metaphors, Patrick...you are the Fixer.

Love and Appreciation,
Sage
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 11, 2010
i like this!
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 11, 2010
Fanciful, mystic, fun! Just what I needed today, Patrick. Thanks so much for posting this uplifting poem!

Anna
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 10, 2010
Very nice, Patrick.
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 10, 2010
THANK GOD FOR HIS SON, JESUS CHRIST AND THE BLOOD. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 10, 2010
Gee you give hope to the damned. Good one, like it a lot.

George
Reviewed by Sylvia Corsini (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2010
I prefer Karma to coincidence. I like this Patrick.
Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on September 10, 2010
Your weird ones are starting to make sense. e
Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on September 10, 2010
I'm not even a believer and you convinced me, my friend.... Thanks, nicely done. Dick
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