I have seen you As a friend on lonely nights Slowly you became More than just a friend to me I started to dream about you I started to build some fantasies around you As I went to bed at night You became the last thing on my mind Then my dreams came alive And you became my poetry Knight at last I started to write about you And the wonderful ocean O’ so blue About beautiful moments within I could write about the perfect love in my life All in but a dream yeah I could become this beautiful woman You told me I could be a world-class woman And that you were proud of me So I penned it all down And called it my poetry What is poetry? Without fantasy it becomes reality And the reality is I also write fantasy poetry And you my reader and friends Come along and read me And you see it as reality Now I will state my case And smash these dreams of mine own And call them lies If that will please you more And because of my own stupidity Now I have to pay the price!! The alternative price it will be The price of humiliation… or Poetical DEATH!! For the evils my poetry has done in the past This could mean the end of so many things
So I am sorry if I ever hurt anyone with these lies By writing about special moments and my stupid DREAMS!! And so…
For now my fantasy dreams will die today…
And without that “love” in my heart There can be no dreams without even poetical love!! No Poetry right?
I have no idea what instigated this write, I daresay it is powerful and yet heartbreaking to read. I can only suspect that someone must have said something hurtful. The biggest mistake any of us can ever do, is to "REACT" to what ignorant people feel they need to say. Reaction gets satisfaction!!! and you obviously just threw it into their lap.
Now my suggestion, for what it's worth, is, you my sweet friend open up your heart and soul and write, write like there is no tomorrow, for it is YOUR gift, allowing ANYONE to deny you this is the biggest mistake you will ever make.
The other factor is, "Assumption is the mother of all f#.k ups" I am sure you have heard this often, isn't it amazing how many immediately "ASSUME" (make an ASS of U and ME) they know and understand everything... let them, allow them to relish in their own stupidity Tinka, but for goodness sake be yourself, and change for NO ONE!!!
We, the writers, write about a lot of stuff. Different genres for different things. Dreams are just dreams, fanttasies are just fantasies. Unfortunately, like many other of my writings before, some took that into accounts and thought they were real.
I think being a good writer is to convincingly write and let people thought that they are real and let them feel your writings for you. In this, I think you have mastered the skill so well. All your poems have been so convincing. Just be happy! When your fans believe what you write, it's your victory! Enjoy it!!!!!
Ah Tinka, without dreams our soul dies, and we pen these dreams because we must. You write what you feel Tinka, and your many friends will read them, dreams or reality, it is Tinka we love and want to share with, Keep penning your heart, We will listen,
What?! Poetry is very many things to very many people - truth, fantasy, fiction, reality, drama, comedy, tragedy, and dreams - write whatever the heck you feel like writing, Tinky, and we will continue to read your posts - and don't worry about nay-sayers, who cares what they say anyway.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
Hey kid?..You are one marvelous woman!..I for one would be proud to have you as a friend..we'd have much to talk about ..believe me our path is very similar..c'on chin up..shoulders back..march! YOU are NOT alone..WE are here..and we love everything you post..you have a most gentle and loving heart..you deserve the best!{{hugs}}..:)
Aww Tinks, I hope this is just a little Glitch because you write some of the best stuff on AD, your poetry is always from the heart and full of meaning you can cover the whole gamut of emotions from silly joyful humour to gut wrenching saddness in a few short words.
keep at it chuck.
I am sorry too...and to a point I am 100% with Eileen here....God cannot be blamed for the stupidity of mankind...he well did give them they brain to create their own downfall...no doubt about that!!
Memory lane the only way to deal with "Poets Block" and reposting my work back on AD with pictures and music!! No connetion with the past otherwise...be not afraid...I will NOT fall into the same "trap" although it still hurts like HELL sis!!
Tinks I don't know what has happened to have you write this unusually sad gut-wrenching write, but you did it beautifully. I hope that you will not let others with small minds and cruel pened remarks bother you, we love everything you write, stand strong and keep writing girl!!
Peace and love, Carole
TINKA? I don't know why you are walking down memory lane. None-the-less, this, like all of your other works, is poetry at its best. ~ Sara (an old friend with a very long memory)
Be well Tinka. I'm sorry.
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
Tinka ,
You like me ,( lol) were born to write because we are creators
and creators do two things well mainly.
Love and create, So remain true to you and keep on creating.
Pecae from a poet to another poet.
Rich Criso Suarez
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
HUH! Poetry is fantasy and dreams. Dream on, write on.
Go wherever the pen does flow...
I don't get it Tinka you have a great following, and we all love and read you every day, so what's the problem! Just write whatever you want to, and forget what anyone thinks. You know we all care about you!
TINKA JUST KEEP ON WRITING YOUR STUFF--If I Worried About Negative What Anybody Else Had To Say-Really Who Cares What They Think_
Most Of Them Can't Even Think Not Alone Write Poetry...
Your Friend, TRASK
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
I don't know what the hell you are talking about, but that's okay, I seldom know what people are talking about. We so-called poets do a lot of soul-searching and spilling of our very hearts and minds and fears and happiness into these little poems we write. We put them out there, and sometimes, later on, we wonder if we have done the right thing. Well, Tinka, I say to you . . . HELL YES! Composing our thoughts is just that, composing our thoughts. If we lie about our thoughts, we lie to ourselves. If you have hurt someone, that is maybe not a good thing, but to not expose your soul in your writing is a worse thing. Sermon over.
I hope this is not true or I am reading it wrong because the romance never dies even if the affair does, you have too much passion to let the poetry die, Keep writing TInk we need you.
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I have no idea what instigated this write, I daresay it is powerful and yet heartbreaking to read. I can only suspect that someone must have said something hurtful. The biggest mistake any of us can ever do, is to "REACT" to what ignorant people feel they need to say. Reaction gets satisfaction!!! and you obviously just threw it into their lap.
Now my suggestion, for what it's worth, is, you my sweet friend open up your heart and soul and write, write like there is no tomorrow, for it is YOUR gift, allowing ANYONE to deny you this is the biggest mistake you will ever make.
The other factor is, "Assumption is the mother of all f#.k ups" I am sure you have heard this often, isn't it amazing how many immediately "ASSUME" (make an ASS of U and ME) they know and understand everything... let them, allow them to relish in their own stupidity Tinka, but for goodness sake be yourself, and change for NO ONE!!!
Warmest hugs and love sweet friend.
Elga
We, the writers, write about a lot of stuff. Different genres for different things. Dreams are just dreams, fanttasies are just fantasies. Unfortunately, like many other of my writings before, some took that into accounts and thought they were real.
I think being a good writer is to convincingly write and let people thought that they are real and let them feel your writings for you. In this, I think you have mastered the skill so well. All your poems have been so convincing. Just be happy! When your fans believe what you write, it's your victory! Enjoy it!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Regis
Reindeer
vesna*
keep at it chuck.
Paul;-)
I am sorry too...and to a point I am 100% with Eileen here....God cannot be blamed for the stupidity of mankind...he well did give them they brain to create their own downfall...no doubt about that!!
Memory lane the only way to deal with "Poets Block" and reposting my work back on AD with pictures and music!! No connetion with the past otherwise...be not afraid...I will NOT fall into the same "trap" although it still hurts like HELL sis!!
Peace and love, Carole
Be well Tinka. I'm sorry.
Tinka ,
You like me ,( lol) were born to write because we are creators
and creators do two things well mainly.
Love and create, So remain true to you and keep on creating.
Pecae from a poet to another poet.
Rich Criso Suarez
Go wherever the pen does flow...
Love,
Eileen
TINKA JUST KEEP ON WRITING YOUR STUFF--If I Worried About Negative What Anybody Else Had To Say-Really Who Cares What They Think_
Most Of Them Can't Even Think Not Alone Write Poetry...
Your Friend, TRASK
Blessings,
Joseph
Felix