Pissy Me (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on September 14, 2005

even if you've nowt to say its worth hearing Tinka, you write "nothing" so very well and paint a picture of a moment we've all passed thru, i usualy stay for ages meself, but hey...keeps the flow going....a good humourous rant this, now tell me something??? dont you just feel better now.....xx take care...xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on September 10, 2005

Tinks as you know "pissy comes and pissy goes"....hang in there!!!

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 9, 2005

Your rich in heart Tink, it shows like a beacon lighting the way! AWesome thoughts in your head-- I've been there nowandthen too.... Love 2U,Sheee

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on September 8, 2005

LOL this is rich Tinka! Loved it.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 8, 2005

oh, dear...i am so sorry! i pray you get over your bad mood soon! hope i didn't do anythin' to make you mad; if i did, i am indeed sorry! forgive me??

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend (?? I HOPE!!), karen lynn in america. :(

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on September 8, 2005

what, you pissy? never!
take care,
carolyn

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Hey, don't listen to that TX guy, he is only from TExas and they have little or no taste there for the really good humor that comes from your pen...LOL! Oh and I let Rufuz sniff at this poem and he agrees you smell like doggie pooh...;) Ed

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

LOL!...Tinka, this was fun read.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

You would be good at doing the moody blues songs :-)

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Sooo nice to get it out in the open! Glad you got that off your chest. This is wonderful! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Lmao ROTFLMAO!!!!
Tinka, I don't know where these funny are coming from , but they're
really wonderful and it feels great o laugh. I never dreamed so much feeling was even possible over the net. silly me.
Tinka another beautiful offering here.
peace',
rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Tina Clark

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Oh Tinka Girl Friend this is just too cute! I laughed my arse off reading it! ROFL I would say that you are no where near being out of things to say! LOL Love it! LOL
needed the humor right now in my life, thanks for giving me a lifting up!

Huggles
Tina

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

I'd Rather Be Broke Not Poor Or Greedy Rich,i.e. ONLY FOOL'S NEVER MAKE MISTAKES...

TRASK

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

I don't know Tinka, for someone who is blocked you sure do pull some great lines out of your bag of tricks. LOL...keep kicking those arses to the moon Tinka. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

well darlin'-

my suggestion is ... don't quit your day job just yet.
but i bet
you'll get it yet.
this poem may be all wet
taint the first like this i met
just get a net
and catch a few words or 2
yup, that oughta' do
ps. still love you
tho you wrote this writ
guess i got what i git.

nice write tho.

TX

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Kewl write Tinka brought a smile to my heart.
Felix

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

The differing use of slang can bring much amusement. You succeed admirably.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

I said no shitty reviews Jerry...but yours were the best...it's a blast...thanks for making me laugh....I feel like killing someone in time and fu...fu...fu...furthermore so those around me for sure...pissed to the brim...but no one wants to come close enough...tooo bloody scared I guess!!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Iron and steal business, huh? Kinda like when I went to the joint for murder and rape, i.e., killing time and fucking the government.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

I love your humor..
Please don't pee on yourself!
You can pee on me though? hee, hee.....
Love ya!
Ron

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

Ah Tinka, this is excellent! You expressed this feeling so perfectly!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lori M (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

LOL...what a great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

hahaha what a wit you have Tinka, great lines iron and steal business LOL!Super poem oh you who will never be at a loss for things to write, you are far too creative;-)!

Eileen

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on September 7, 2005

It's just one of those days, I'm sure. I know this feeling you write about. I like the way you express yourself. It's okay!