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Messed Up Love
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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Messed Up Love


 


Love becomes a mess


With no one to caress


Sex a bore


If you cannot explore


When you open the door


That leads to the floor


Next you know


It’s a no-no show


Love becomes nice


Together with good advice


But once bitten


Shy twice


Three times over again


Sex is a mess


Without love’s success


A moment of bliss


A national quiz


The final outcome


A hiss


 


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 Reviews of "Messed Up Love"
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
A charming write, sometimes cleaning up a mess can be fun.

Best wishes T. B.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Sex is a mess
Without love’s success

I think you're right, Tinky - and those little bugs need love, too!



Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
well done

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
This is too cute... well done!~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Hot Romantic Yooooouuuuuuuuuuu...

TRASK

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
well done.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
I think you are so right with this one Tinka, and expressed it so well.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
YUK for bugs I hate em! The poem is great. Very clever!

Maybe tonights the night, sis!;-)Surprise Surprise;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Yeh...you need some variety and humour in love
Nice message delivered with panache and style Tinka !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Yep-- messed up cannot be good. Great photo too.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Haha! A riot this one is. I'm sorry, Tinka, everyone else is taking it so serious, and I suppose it is, but the ending was funny to me. good. Gotta love it.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Don't let that love bug get you down.

Reviewed on November 30, 2005
bug of a love poem Tinks

Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Excellent write, Tinka; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Great poem with a tough message cloaked in fun. R


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