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Wounded Heart{(Bobbi's Challenge)}
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Wounded Heart~ {(Bobbi's Challenge)} Oopsie..,NOT THE SAME WORDS BUT ...The Idea the same!! ****** curiosity, fool, residence, blanket, windows, lifted, among, misery, time, light, fern, want, pride, kind, money, graze. ****** Wounded Heart - Tony� s 16 word Challenge (repost) This is my heart I am talking about It is wounded...badly scared Not out of curiosity Not out of spite All because... I want to be... your friend But I made a fool of myself Because... It was not the right time For us to meet... Now I am your misery� You brought light into my life And I started to love you Not your money� for that I have too much pride You where the only one among a thousand Who was� so very kind to me.. Now in my residence I sit alone And I am crying Looking through the foggy windows of my living room. The fern in the corner makes shadows against the wall With this blanket I try to cover up my wounds My spirit is not lifted� it is ruined And all you can see Is the terrible graze� Of my wounded heart Yes...wounded heart!! Copyright �2003 ~ 2006 Tinka Boukes All Rights Reserved

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Reviews of "Wounded Heart{(Bobbi's Challenge)}"

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

nice! ... you weave in the words well ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Quite a challenge piece, Tinky - and I'm waving back at you!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Nice indeed.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Tinka,

Excellent write; you have met the challenge very well! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

well done! thank you for your comments on my class' haiku, you really perked up little 9 year olds!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

HaHa, Girlfriend!!! Great minds think alike, I guess, or was it just a coincidence that we both grabbed the wrong words to write totally different poems? You did a much finer job than I did; the flow is smooth and the content seamless.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

This is an adroit answer to Bobbi's challenge Tinka !
Love the animated picture
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Why call it "Bobbi's Challenge," if it isn't?

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Extremely well done!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

When the challenge is made you are there to accept and you really outdone yourself on this one, beautiful, words, rhymes and melody. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

I like the natural flow and emotional outpouring of this, Tinka... and the added bonus that it deftly meets an admirable challenge is just the pink bow it comes wrapped in!! I can't bear presents that remain unwrapped :( Give it to someone special instead! :)) A Doctor in this instance, perhaps... now THERE's a thought... Natural and seemingly effortless, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Great Tink! Good job. Loved the pix too.

Bobbi

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Powerful poem in answer to a challenge.

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