Intangible sense of ‘let down your hair’ repulsion
Ugly classes decayed and saddened
Effect of the un-beauteous measured and clanned
Whilst the writing hand was unfamiliar
The tensions of stern conditions categorized
Faecal bodies in close proximity acquired
Method of ‘to whom the bell’ throes inadequate
“Work it out, work it out” close proximity lucrative
Embodiment of the immigrant soul scarred character
Philosophically impotent, reduced their individual strength,
“Don’t come to your census,” and now that we mentioned, streets of scold are paved with compression, except by some analogous vigor, required occupation the Great War; to that they say, “k-k-k-krazy, ugly krazy, you’re the only w-w-w-war that we abhor; the s-s-s-sun never shines over the tenements, and we’ll all be cowering behind the k-k-k-kitchen door. . . in close proximity as frightening as the war!”
Yes, have to agree that it is exciting to see you in another facet of yourself(ves) and maybe the exhilaration of combining forces just enables that switch with ease. Tough and edgey, but not without humility and compassion... which makes it all the more readable and powerful. Very well done to both of you. TY Kate xx
If I didn't know better Tink I would say this had been written by a young poet. A very inyaface stream of images hit us in quick succession rather like one of those avant garde short movies they show in art house cinemas.
Tinka this is deep and serious work and a nice change that shows your mind is capable of switching from romance to world affairs and social statements. Well done.
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this piece flowed, straight into the readers heart. (imo),
in essence this piece seemed to tell of how there are still those who divide themselves based on outwardly appearences, you
two did an outstanding job, blending inks perfectly.
thanks for sharing such talent, mike
Different un-usual and very un-like the Tinka writes, good and thought provoking nonetheless. Good collaboration Tinka and Dennis.
warm hugs and love
Elga
Take care,
Sherry
To be honest, and I always am...I can't see your essence in this composition...:)
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
Still a fine collab as always!
Love,
Eileen
Birgit and Roger
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Ron
great poem.
Susan