Mermaid” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

I let myself drift away

Far beyond the moon and stars so bright

This feeling within my heart

Just feel so right...

Let it carry me up and down

So pure of soul and deep of heart

Peaceful in the rebirth of knowing

Fair is the night

New is the song

While skylark sing out loud

Beside the water of the sea

I rest and muse today

Mermaid of the sea

Takes me away

I cry

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on August 2, 2006

Very lovely write.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on August 1, 2006

Tender and tranquil, Tinka. I truly enjoyed this...wonderful graphic and music selection, as well.

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on August 1, 2006

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 1, 2006

I rest and muse today

Rest Well, Tinky! And a very lovely poem here.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 1, 2006

Ah Tink, as always your writes wreck havoc on the romantics in the audience and you know I am one of those. Love this one and love mermaids.

FEe

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

just a kiss for a fine poem.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

lovely, serene poem!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

Tinka

I love the song of the spiralling skylark, and the roar and thunder of the crashing surf and sea..

Beautiful and edifying composition

Peace

Peter

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

Very interesting piece, Tinka. I like it and could see the seashore and the skylark. Well done.

Bobbi

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

Z BEST YET....TRASK

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

You would make an awesome siren Tinka...get that voice all conditioned because I think mermaiding would be your calling.
Susan

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

Most beautiful
as your soul Tinka.....
x0x0x

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

A time for serinity

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

mermaids are great. this one is really nice, Tinka. Dawn

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

No crying, just float on, so relaxing...ed

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

good stuff tinka

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

Beautiful Tinka : )

Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

An enchantingly beautiful poem Tinka. I'm going to join you and float along.;-) Lovely!Eileen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

Susan described it very well
magical poem, dear Tinka
love and peace

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

this is so dreamy and serene...I love it!

Susan

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on July 31, 2006

His, Spirit, is SO AWESOME, can take us on so many magical, adventures. Beautiful write, sis. Rocky