"Been a bad day again...but I will survive!!
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"When Love Died"
On a cold rock she sits
Head down on her knees
Away from the world of abusive yelling
Her clothes
Now tattered and torn by violence
Some stranger walked pass joyfully
Singing
“I will survive”
But how is that possible
When her heart is dead
When there is nothing left to say
No energy to fight back
With a mind filled with fear
What’s left of her…also filled with emotional pain
So very tender and raw deep within
With horrifying words still echoing in her head
Heartbeat slowly fading
Like the footstep of the stranger
Closing her sticky eyes
For the last time she’s down on her knees
Asking mercy from above
Knowing
Love died long ago
Copyright © 2006 Tinka Boukes
My Prayers are with you for Strength and Wisdom!
I am sending you healing energy for your emotions, as mixed up as they
must be.
I've been there, I know those lonely and empty feelings!
Find something you like to do, and be happy doing it!
Like Writing far away!
These are just ideas! I care!
You're always in my prayers!
Great poem- Right to the Heart
Ahhh.. another poem came to mind~
Have a GREAT and Inspirational, Wisdom kind of day! my friend~
Warm HuGs, Warrior Sheeexoox
Bless you,
Joselyn
stay strong, Carole
Love,
CJ
Your beauty of words raises all low levels to new heights. Your poetry tears at the heart but caresses the soul my friend.
Rusty
My heart grieves for you...
Love,
Eileen
Love is over rated.
Enjoy your work Tinka.
Cheer up! x0x0x0x
Your Friend TRASK
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Love,
Susan
This is so sad!!! I hope this is just a poem!!!!! Pain well-expressed.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
Fee
you are a great creative writer
A sad and painful write Tinka
I know this all too well I've witnessed
the after effects of abuse
makes one want take the law into thier own hands
and dispence street justice rather then allow the courts
to deal with the abusers.
Then again same women still think they got what they deserve
because she have been brain washed to think she was responsible
for the situation that "got out of hand"
Before you know, she will no longer have that problem
she'll no longer feel the pain of abuse,
you know why? .....She'll be dead, as cruel as I have made this sound, so is life.
So many times I hear the echos, of those in pain
" Please don't hurt him," don't hand cuff him, don't mistreat him,
"it was all my fualt," I shouldn't have pissed him off.
Who will fight for them, once they are gone, the abuse will continue
here, there, everywhere, and nobody gives a shit.
I don't even want to sign this one
it's too painful
Love & Peace
And his moved in a different direction
Yes if love is dead bury it and move on the Lord has a
New path for you to fallow!!
This is a very well written poem great Imagery And emotion
Throughout the page !
Love And Peace To You!!
Lots of Hugsss....Morning Star
Michael
Oh this is painful, heart crushing Tinka.