Disappointment (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2007

Beautiful write and beautiful artwork

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

Beautiful artwork, poem and selection of music, you are one talented lady my friend! I agree with one of the other reviews, this would be a great opening for a novel...very powerful! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

What a Beautful and Powerful painting Sweet Tink~!
SENDING many loving healing energies your way, RIGHT NOW! CAtch up and if you need em' -Store em' in your Magic Healing box- Over on the dresser, near your spirit books! ;)
Love ya! Tink/Sis
WArmly, Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
STAY HaPPY!
This song feels comforting! Thank you Sweet Tink~

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on June 25, 2007

Be still my heart!

Tinka, you are so very gifted in the artwork and poetry, and choosing the music, too.

Bless you, wonderful Tinka!
Love &Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Love Your painting Tinka
Goes well with your excelllent poetry

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Love the art. This would be a great opening for a novel.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

21-THE LIGHT INSIDE IS GRADUAL-THE BRIGHTER IT BECOMES ALLOWS FOR NEW FINDINGS IN WHAT WAS PREVIOUSLY THOUGHT OF AS DARK- {Understanding & love - Ted}

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Sounds like it's time to change Destiny, Tinky.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Oh the daily struggle with out emotions, all the needs and desires that never seem to be met, dreams that just frustrate, leaving us with more dissapointment....Know the scene sis...
Call on HIM, the only one who really knows or cares!
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

sometimes destiny seems to be tugging us apart, leaving us feeling disjointed and unfulfilled ... disappointed in the direction we're going ... we are put into a state of mind where all that seems left is our desperate plea for divine intervention ...

most moving, Tinka ... keep safe & well ...

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Hi there Tinka...just thought I'd spend time revisiting old friends here on AD and read their work. I enjoyed this poem, but am sad to find you obviously feeling blue.
Hug,
Susan
myspace.com/happyscribbler

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Awe!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Tinka, I know that feeling all too well. I know how the sea can lure you, tug you under when your heart already feels like it has drowned. But girl, as long as we still live, there is still the possibility for surprise. So keep the faith.

~ Sara

P.S. - Any news on the baby front?

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Sad, and we will all be there
where it will be tuff to smile..
Love ya Tinka...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Very touching indeed,Hugssssssss

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Great imagery... "Disappointment" flows in rhythm and glows in poetic excellence.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Very touching and evocative write and as my
Eyes dance through the page
I felt her sadness and deep emotions!
Beautifully expressed Tinka.
Love Peace and Happiness to you my friend...Yolie

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

very evocative.
pure Tinks

good write

john+

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

So deeply sorrowful you have me with misty eyes Tinka!I hope you don't feel this way...Superb poem!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

neat write-i like the mystery

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

poignant

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

We've all been through this emotion at one time or another. Well expressed Tinka. Hope you are well.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

It is amazing but this write seems to reflect a lot of the feelings that I have been experiencing myself in the last little while...

Fee

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Lots of emotion in so few words...well written.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

I Figgured You'd Gathered It By Now--Life Is 1 Big Disappointment...

Well Written Words...

TRASK

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

this one tugs at my heart.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

We all certainly do need help from one another, and those closest to us at times Sissy. When it doesn't happen it can leave a big hole in our soul that takes a long time to heal.

A touching and evocative write. Well done!
Blessings and Light from big bro ...
Richard

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

The well of life never runs dry.

There was no sign that she was still okay

As destiny grabbed her in both hands

She cries within

Disappointed

�Please help�