Dark Becomes - Dawn (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Very beautifully done Tinka, Holly

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

Great comparisons, TinkaSweets. Thank you for sharing this fine collaborative offering. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

Day and night, darkness and light; the dungeon shadows against the forest enchantment with the sun up, a scream of light and the shadows retires.
Great construction of words and meanings.
Georg

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

i like this

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Quite enlightening, Granny and Lance!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

where would dawn's embrace be without dark's shadows? ;-)
engaging write, tinka!
peace and blessings always,
carolyn

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Love the form here. Beautiful

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Very creative form Tinka...enjoyed much...Hugs and Love Peggy

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

You make some interesting contrasts in a lovely poem. Total darkness still frightens. BTW you're a beautiful cactus flowering pink all over. Victor

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Love at dawn or dark Tinka...
Stay safe in the dark and dawn
It's starting to get dark here..
SMooooooooooo0000000000000CH!

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Dark or Dawn... tis a good write

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

unique and lovely analogies Tinka and Lance! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

An Excellent creative piece
Enjoyed reading
Peace be with you

Love
William

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Such beautiful comparisons that lead the mind to look at the poets thoughts and mellow with each line....lovely Tinka

Fee

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Oh Sweet Baby Girl! You have created a masterpiece of beauty, wisdom and understanding! Each that read this LOVE OFFERING will get a blessing! LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Darkly quirky. Like dreams.

Ron

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

A very creative and clever write my friend, beautifully written and the style is wonderful, the music only enhances this great offering...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ari Puso (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

brilliant contrasting thoughts! Ari

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

Delusional dusk deliberately delegated - Dowsed diligently delivering defiantly {You are something & more} -All the good stuff -Ted

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

This is clever and fulfilling Sissy. The formatting with colors is unique and supports the image wonderfully. You two guys really are a force together. Blessings and love from big bro ...
Richard

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

What a difference a day makes. Good one Tinky-Doll