Betrayed (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Willie Maartens

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

This is deep! Life in short. Best wishes. Willie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 31, 2008

straight down to the Bone
no pulling punches on the one
Peace be with you my dear frined

William

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 31, 2008

oh man
soooooooooooo true!!!!!!!!!
pax A :(

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on January 31, 2008

Short Sweet and too the point

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

A lot of hurt in this one
Always love you Tinka
Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Your pain comes through loud and clear in this piece. If you need any help chopping off a head, let me know- I'm available.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Oh I know the meaning of those words, very literally. They are so true, especially when the betrayed trust is from a person who is supposed to be there unconditionally, but wasn't. If I had to rate this piece, I would give it 5 out of 5 stars. Thanks for sharing, Tinka.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Oh Tinka this one cuts so deeply! I can feel the anger and raw pain.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Oh so powerful Tinks!
Remember though betrayers
really are betraying themselves.
So...let em lie in their own bed!
Hugs
Dale

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Nothing hurts more than being betrayed, as you so powerfully express in this heart wrenching poem, I feel your pain dear Tinka,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Excellent conveyance of thoughts in so few words!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Hello Tinks, who's the benedict arnold, I'll cut his heart out and feed it my pet alligators, love&hugs

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Strong and harsh as the words suggest...anger and pain and a desire to get even

Fee

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

A small amount of words used to describe insurmountable pain. (hugs) love holly

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Just write it all out, sister!!!
And remember - you're being loved!
Becca~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Little one, we keep on opening that darned door expecting to see what we wish is there, but man was created by God but acts like little incontrolable demons.
Best you broke a botle of Chardonay (or two, or three) with a friend, get a lift off to Bachus world and forget all about.
I have a corkscrew.

Georg

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Nothing hurts more Tinka...stay strong.
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Hang in there baby, I promise it will get better.

Walt

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

Excellent expression of the Ass. enjoyed the read...Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

strongly said!

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

In just a few words of wisdom you have
Painted a picture of the pain of
Betrayal of trust!
Excellent piece!!
Peace Love and hugsss....Morning Star

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

yes. i agree with this. interesting play on words tinka and i do think your point came across. well done my friend.

always.
randy

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

...cast the ashes in the sea...and sail far away from them...trusting never to return.

with good wishes...

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

Amen! Happens to the best of us . . . Survival . . . That's the name of the game, Tinka . . .

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

The worst kind of feeling is when trust is betrayed. I feel so sad for you. Your words here or short and that's a heavy measure of your emotions.
I'm so very sorry Tinka!
Love and my blessings.
Susan

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

Well you were straight on here Tinka, Anyone to betray trust is an ass for sure. I do hope all is well with you dear, rememer there are a lot of us here if you need to talk. Your den family member.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

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