The couplets really work here, and it has such a classical feel, no matter what the religion, i dont find it rife with controversy at all, and I'm Catholic.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2008
Good wishes received gratefully. Same to the sender!
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It pleases me to read a poem that honors the Pen of the Poet; the language, and enriches Poetry... This is a unique bountiful beauty... A true flower from the poetic garden, and I have no bigger word than excellent to qualify this composition!
This "Saturnalia et Sigillaricia" does feasts the closing of 2008, and opens the pages of learning for 2009.
What you proffer the reader here, Sara, is certainly rife with controversy. With regard to the purposeful drollness in the piece, I'll pass on the orgiastic festival with excessive drinking thankyou.
However, given the nature of the season, and despite your ethnic mentality, I am impressed, on occasion, with the unwavering cognitive content that you hold as genuine.
Well thought out. Did you know that on board ships (Navy, Coast Guard etc) it is a custom that the youngest member of the crew becomes Captain for a day on Christmas day? Perhaps that is where that origianated.
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fee
"So many Gods, their lives full and abundant
pared down to one, and yet we still don’t know." This is so true, I believe that God is One and resides within us ALL. Namaste, Carin' Spirit.
A short story of mine was included in an anthology of short fiction by fourteen of Port Town Publishing Company's authors. It is out of print and no longer available except as a download. Contact me at charlenetess@yahoo.com if you want it.
A short story of mine was included in an anthology of short fiction by fourteen of Port Town Publishing Company's authors. It is out of print and no longer available except as a download. Contact me at charlenetess@yahoo.com if you want it.
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It pleases me to read a poem that honors the Pen of the Poet; the language, and enriches Poetry... This is a unique bountiful beauty... A true flower from the poetic garden, and I have no bigger word than excellent to qualify this composition!
This "Saturnalia et Sigillaricia" does feasts the closing of 2008, and opens the pages of learning for 2009.
In gratitude and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
However, given the nature of the season, and despite your ethnic mentality, I am impressed, on occasion, with the unwavering cognitive content that you hold as genuine.
Don't know the other gods, but you've penned a wonderful write to include ALL. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas!, Karla.
Got the gift - thank you! Truffles were delicious!!
will they have their own slaves, who become masters,
who have their own slaves, who...
Just wondering, or am I wandering?
hugs
fee
pared down to one, and yet we still don’t know." This is so true, I believe that God is One and resides within us ALL. Namaste, Carin' Spirit.