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Oh! If you could feel them
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They cannot imagine their own imagination.
Nor can they appreciate their inherent freedom.
But like the vagabond they ambles ever
in the course of adversity that ends never,
for they are poor and their story is as dismal
as that of the heart, wrecked by the tragic separation
of the hopeful hope from the canal of optimism.
Oh! If you could feel them then you would have realized,
how senseless is this world to their misery,
on who’s today, the tomorrow of the world depends.
Yet, the world marches on, beside the demons of animism,
disregarding the ignorant childhood days of the human evolution.

Copyright 2005 Bhuwan Thapaliya.

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 Reviews of "Oh! If you could feel them"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 28, 2005
It is an abysmal curse upon mankind that any child should suffer. Sometimes I don't think this world has evolved at all. Powerful, soul-reaching write, my friend. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2005
Powerful Awakening Message and So well said!
This should be out there. Posters even. Bulletin boards, windows and bill boards!
Thank you!
Tracey

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
Innocent children are always the first maimed and tainted by the ways of the world. Beautiful and courageous write !!

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Bhuwan,

Certainly takes away one's excuses ... very emotive poetic write - exceptional!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Bhuwan, this piece pierced my heart. The tragedy of human indifference to those around us is unconscionable, and unfortuntatly widespread. Too many of us are blind to those in need who are right in front of us. I sometimes think the entire world is like Marie Antoniette who when told her people had no bread to eat reportedly said, "Let them eat cake!" Thank you for opening my eyes and reminding me that I am my brother's keeper.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Powerful insightful write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
At the rate things are going Bhuwan we may all be forced to feel them!
The world is God's wonder but the people in it are abominable! No child should be neglected, yet most are even the most affluent in this country are sorely in need of love.God help us to see it, then forgive us as we try to change. If only! Thanks for sharing and caring Bhuwan!...Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Very heartfelt read Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 21, 2005
So deeply poignant and deep, this was just heartbreaking Bhuwan,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
a sad, haunting write...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Yes the images do hurt the soul of a person that cares about these things. They are in my mind all the time.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
This hurts deeply, Bhuwan. The title alone, hurts. Thanks for posting this.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Dear Bhuwan,

Heart wrenching write, sad but true, there is no thought for our future.... our children. It is all based on what can be gained, how it's achieved is of no importance !!

Take care and God bless

warm hugs
Elga


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