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Melancholy Memories
by Sandra S Corona → (All Poetry by Sandra S Corona)
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Love doesn't always stay new, pristine and 'vinyl' (flexible). Sometimes it scratches and/or breaks due to unexplainable but preventable conditions.

Melancholy Memories Haunting love, a worn, scratched, record stuck replaying a line of words … over, over, and over again … is how our love has been lately— melancholy memories. Trying to find words to define how we side-step one another … over, over and over again … avoiding contact. Just wearing melancholy memories. Slippers in different closets, one near decadence of their soul— over, over and over again— clamor through days … robotic, melancholy memories. Uncomfortable companions, neither anxious to live alone … over, over and over again … nursing histories of failure— melancholy memories. Is there but one love per person, do they fear finding romance … over, over and over again … fearing repetition, death, disease— melancholy memories? The needle scratches deep discord but, till the record is broken … over, over and over again … it’s best to stay with known players— melancholy memories! copyright Sandra S. Corona 2008 "Love Has Its' Thorns"

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Sandra,

Well-done . . . this is so good - thanks always for sharing your poetic talent!!

Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

"Melancholy Memories" let me "nursing stories of failure" as losing one of my daughter nearly two years ago, whe hadn't see each other for forty years. Yes, perhaps the correct word is failure.
Her name was Sandra.

Georg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

Love. Who really knows it? Love has so many "levels." A thought-inciting offering, Sandy. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 11, 2008

Soooo very real when it comes to love and affairs of the heart...nothing is really sure and nothing is guarenteed. As the man says you pay your money and you take your chances.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Your words ring the truth with a bell of knowledge.I enjoy reading this poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Well done Sandra and so true, keep these coming
In Christs Love
Michelle~