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Sea NOT Temptation
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Sea NOT Temptation



Cast not your net, upon this sea
Allow for some tranquility
It's taken years to calm these waves
Row not your oars...keep efforts saved


So old and deep these waters run
Your net is fresh...so strong and young
For peril lurks, 'neath surface still
With currents icy.....laced by chill


Don't break the peace...the silence...here
Just stay on shore.....don't venture near
For settled  deep on ocean floor
Is debris, of what sailed......before


And how these old wrecks came to end
Not fault of sea.....but...hand of men
The sea is mother, with milk of foam
That succors ark....which floats then roams



Upon whose surface shines the sun
And moonlight...when the day is done
That pulls the tides from high to low.....


Raise up your net....it's time to go

Lady A




 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Sea NOT Temptation"
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
: ) Absolutely beautiful!!

"Upon whose surface shines the sun
And moonlight...when the day is done
That pulls the tides from high to low
Raise up your net....it's time to go"

Jack

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Another fantastic poem Anita.....Damn you're good. :) ty, Dani

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
A wonderful piece. I enjoyed it much.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Well done. Rhyme and meter are tough and you blend them well!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Perfect rhythm to this wonderful poem, profound poem.I love this.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Anita this is intriguing..I am always watching
documentaries on these lost ships...this is
great writing...floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Gorgeous.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Lady A, love the briny feel of this one. Excellent flow as always.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Masterpiece Anita!!

Love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
everything about this work is lovely...the picture, the rhythm, which is wave like, the imagery and the message. Well done, Lady A

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
I agree with Katy! A wonderful write Anita!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
You have a wonderful sense of poetic rhythm... your rhyme is always enchanting. As someone who has a great passion for the sea, it's lovely knowing that this one will linger... I love the "attitude" in this poem.. Great stuff! katy xox.


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