Grains of Sand (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2014

Symbolically meaningful; and I believe that a grain of sand can become the rarest and most beautiful of pearls. A pearl is also symbolic depending on one's interpretation. Thank you, Carol. Love and best wishes,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on August 28, 2012

May you always have "Grains of Sand"
plentiful in your life *Carolee*
thanks for your poem of substance

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 28, 2012

I'VE SEEN THIS DONE AT A WEDDING. BEAUTIFUL DECLARATION OF THE COUPLE'S COMMITMENT TO ONE ANOTHER AND TO THEIR LOVE AND THE SOLIDIFYING OF TWO LIVES INTO ONE. A WONDERFUL SHARING, LILY...THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

I like the music of this one; it read for me like a 'spell' and that made it curiously in need of repeating. My favorite line is "Love beheld sees how they land." Seeing how they land.....I really like that. Goood one! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

Everything we create in life truly needs a sound foundation.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

All it takes is that one grain of sand which to you seems like a boulder!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

well written, heartfelt poem, Lily

john

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Beautiful... :) best wishes,neerja

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

as always, beautiful love poem.

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

You always know how to speak love Lilly, my wife and I forever build a strong foundation.

Great!

Mark

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Carolee ~
Beautiful layering of sands gathering for a foundation
of a lifetime to evermore love. A curtsey my Lady for
such a beautiful love poem.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

You know how to build a beautiful foundation, one which is essential.

Di

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Dear lady Lily your romantic pen of love to paper always reflects the importance of love's relationships.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

what an everlasting endeavour two such in love starting a castle of love one grain of sand at a time together, beautifully thought and excellently penned, your gift is in your words
budd

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

I am a builder, well sort of. Looks like beach time, lots of sand there. All things start as a single element and grow to wharever you make of it. Some things last beyond a lifetime once created. Catles of love are ommortal. Wondeful write.

Stay well and keep writing

Eddy

Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Beautiful Carolee, it takes working together and once the foundation is built it will last a lifetime

Gail

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Beautifully penned ... I loved the picture too ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Ah, Adriaen said it for me and said it better than I would have. Grains of sand are the cornerstone to the castle that love builds. Without the grains of sand combining and supporting each other, there can be no love.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

Carol, One by one in whatever we endeaver...it starts
out slowly, but remember each of us still are still
individuals and need our own space.

Beautiful as always!

Deborah

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2012

All the single grains of sand, build to a strong and solid foundation for your love. What a beautiful base to start with.
"Build with me please if you dare
My sweet prince with princess fair"

I dare !!!!