This is not written about anyone I know. It was inspired by something I read. How many people long for the substance of touch but settle for cyber stroking instead?
If you see yourself in these words, please don't assume I've singled you out. I think a lot of people will identify with aspects of this piece. Words (even through an impersonal medium) have the power to touch in profound ways that few of us fully understand. Still, the real desire is for a more tangible touch....something we all need.
I totally agree with Vesna on this...and add my own humble remark:
There are far too many of these "substance lackers" in this day and
age.
Another excellent piece of work, Chanti dear.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2005
This is perfection!!! Indeed TRUTH ..sad, I know, but TRUTH nonetheless.Saved this one..
A very touching poem Chanti, and very touching, in that I can relate to some of this also. I long for my fiance's touch, but for now, we will just have to talk in cyberspace, because our phone is disconnected. So Iwill just have to be content to speak to him in our IM's. A very good write Chanti. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
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There are far too many of these "substance lackers" in this day and
age.
Another excellent piece of work, Chanti dear.
Vesna*
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
your poetic voice is very strong ...
Paul;-]
so true
I know at least one couple
that met on line and married
William .....Peace & Love