Triangular Angulations (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Triangular Angulations
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Triangular Angulations… There I be, lost in the triangle aboard the Rene Lyn, Surrounding me are many a sharks fin, My compass spinning, off the charts I seem to be, ain’t it a sin, No engine have I got, I am adrift much to my chagrin… A fog bank did enshroud me, I couldn’t anywhere see, The ocean did turn a shade of gray, not the usual blue sea, The ocean now becalmed, not a ripple of movement, I hope that the gods of the sea do hear my fervent plea… No breeze to feel, no sky to see, no sun, but warmth I do feel, No sound, my clocks have even stopped running, My watch stopped when did the clocks, Wish do I that I were home on my beach sunning, This is too weird, the triangle has been known for its cunning… Will I be caught here for life to slowly starve? My radio does not transmit, but receive it does, So many others seem to be speaking the frequency all a buzz, Are we caught in the present, the future or a time that was…? © ed ~ 2/9/05

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Fabulous adventure - stay right there and I'll come look for you - always wanted to get Lost in the Triangle, too.

PS Keep your eye out for both Atlantis and giant UFOs - they are both in that Triangle with you somewhere.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

This feels like the first page of an interesting trip through un-time, Ed. I think you could write several poems off of the groundwork you have laid here. In my imagination I am seeing strange occurences, the finding of a magical world beneath the sea and in the end, harnessed dolphins towing you back up into your old familiar seas where time begins to move forward again. I stepped right into this poem, Ed and my imagination went in so many directions. This is excellent.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

I read this as a very deep inner look to life...the triangle

Newborn

Life

Death

Well penned Ed!!

Oh Yeah it was goodnorning here...now as I pen this it is luch time one o'clock!!

And you must be fast asleep ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Poseidon has you in his mits Ed. Seya...

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 9, 2005

Sounds like you should stay out of those triangles... Enjoyed.