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I told Daddy, but he never listens...by Rufuz
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I told him it was hot,


A hundred degrees or more,


But he just ran out the door,


In his skivvies no less,


Livin’ with daddy certainly ain’t a bore…


 


He wanted me to take him for a walk,


But try as he may, I would do nothing but talk,


I am NOT going out in that heat,


Sorry Dad I do not mean to balk,


But I got thick hair & you got none…


 


The sun was high in the sky,


Emitting rays of sunshine,


He got burnt pretty much all over,


Daddy just never listens to me,


All I could do for him was sigh…J


© Rufuz J 08.07.2007


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 Reviews of "I told Daddy, but he never listens...by Rufuz"
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
Rufuz and you crack me up Silly!
- YOU know it Rufuz, there is a good time and a bad time -Now, go give sweet kisses/licks on daddy's none/hair :) *The Smart Brain Dome*
Wow, I love your style ED!
WArm hugs and Warmer love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 9, 2007
awwwwwwwe you are so thoughful Rufuz! You also have a very good dad to go out with you ib such heat...I'm glad it will soon be coolr...

Love
Aunty Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Lick his sore skin...and tell him you are just trying to take the hurt AWAY...woof!!

Maybe next time he will listen!!

Love Aunty Stinky

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
As a dog my self, if I where in your paws I would drink his beer and if he want to go walking he should be carrying me.
woof!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Hide his bong Rufuz...LOL

Walt

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Man is hesitant to absorb wisdom he forgets like the sun will burn you or listen to animals...they have the wisdom we ignore. They stay in the shade and drink lots of water. You teel'm Rufuz.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
cute, yes, we must be tons of fun to watch. Lady J

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
poor rufuz

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
I know Rufuz, your Dad is stubborn
Yore a smart dogeee Rufuz...

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Rufuz, nice write...don't worry, one day, he'll wake up and realize it's the next day. Keep smiling.

Dan

Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Ed,

Mebbe you'll learn when you pass out in the middle of the street.

Heat ain't nothin to mess around with. Stay inside, where it's cool!

Listen to Rufuz, he knows. And he has to sport a fur coat that can't be taken off. Poor baby.

Both of you stay safe, 'k?

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Good on you, Rufuz; just tell daddy Ed to be careful; it's not a good thing to get overheated. This is one reason why I try to avoid the heat; toooo hot for me here! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

hot here too, temps to be in the 100's all this week. YUCK!!!!

Reviewed on August 7, 2007
RUFUS --- GOOD DOG!

Some people don't have enough sense to come in, out of the rain, either!

Others even fall through big BAY WINDOWS!

Some others even pay TOP DOLLAR for 8 X PURIFIED TAP WATER!

WOOF ???


Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Mandi, my cat, loved this and had a little smirk on her face when she finished the last line. She's got it good and stays in the shadows just like Rufuz; she knows her black fur would catch on fire in the sun. Loved it!

George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
My dogs just read this, Rufie Boy, and they really don't know how you put up with that guy!

PS They also want to know if he's still wearing those tattered old skid marked skivvies of his, or if you've finally bought him a new pair??!!

I'm guessing it's the old skid mark skivvies, and I don't blame you for not wanting to go out in public with him!


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