Now I remember why I don’t like the shore in summer… (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 12, 2010

Reads like you are getting old.

Ron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

Since when does a fart bother you? Crowds? I get that and relate big time. Patrick

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

Ed,
Straight and to the point...What happened to the peaceful, serene beaches they show on Tv?

Blessings+
~Linda

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

west coast, east coast, all the same I see.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 28, 2010

not a very peaceful time-

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I know of the frustration written here. Lancaster County PA tourists! But it only a few who screw it up for everybody. I don't really enjoy the beach, but my wife loves it.

Peace out Ed,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I am not a big fan of the beach, Ed; so I can appreciate where "you are coming from." Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Yes, agreed, but guess who saw sharks!
The beach this summer was so amazing, shark and seal filled, but back to the subject which is I really did enjoy your poem Ed!
Cheers,
Christine

Reviewed by John Coppolella

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Thanks for expanding my vocabulary. It should come in handy next time I am in Atlantic City. I liked the line about the guy with the star. That stood out as the best part for me.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

Ed, you nailed this one perfectly. It is reminiscent of the "National Lampoons Animal House". With not one but thousands of Blutos(John Belushi). Organized chaos. A riot about to breakout into a hockey game. May peace and love be with you my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by c lea harris

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

I"m with John, although we don't have that problem here in Alpena, Mi. They have grills that we get to bring or own stuff, but as far as the kids sometimes, yep, sometimes there's just to many. Not sure who out numbers who, the kids or seagulls, on some days. This is way to cute, but hope you get to have some downtime on the shore, before winter hits.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on August 27, 2010

that just about sums it up mt friend '' too many people showing too much fat and too little cloth

cool write

john+