Saga of the Moon and the sea (poem) by J. K. Roseline on AuthorsDen

Saga of the Moon and the sea
by J. K. Roseline → (All Poetry by J. K. Roseline)
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The moon's gravitational force plays on the ocean tides. The Moon orbits our planet while the earth rotates in its axis.With all these forces reacting with each other, what we get to experience is the amalgamation of all these forces in this beautiful universe. We can only fathom them in our own small ways.

If you were the moon and I were the sea This is how our story so true would be Destined nearer not to be forever Lament for one another Always in awe be of each other! Waning and waxing the moon sure hangs on See how the sea lies and loiters on Her deadly locks ,she waves and croons to murmur Fretting the Moon and the sea not any nearer But distance makes the hearts grow fonder The Sea now she sparkles and,dances to watch the Moon While he strolls the night in his shining armour Illuminates her sheen and makes her shine She gestures in darkness, sighs aloud! To stare up at sky, then smile abound The silence of the moon Is the calm before the coup Reach out from the sky to gaze Quietly bit by bit Over the sea to be lit In isolation the moon paces up and down In various forms he parades Sometimes pale and sickled Or bright, rounded , hidden The various moods designed day by day Timeless in space he walks on sure paths In endlessly persistent ways Dancing the crazy cupid moons on to her face Thunders the sea, she is in a trance Held now with his piercing glance The core of her being shaken to move The moon rays now kissing The warm beams lighting Caught in the swoon and woken is she Wild and wayward her ruling would be The sea queen gestures to see His majesty’s celestial amorous cover No escape from the mystic power she loathes Angered wild but with passion she flows But rises like a possessed demon in action Drives through winds to work up high tides Noisy currents, disturbing sights Ebbs on shores with frenzy and fright At times, husky and eccentric her might Disturbing ships and wild life watch on Drenched in his love Lonesome and desirous With her vanity waves on fire She steps out to engulf in her dainty folds Bellows deep from her girdle Bulge out her body The fullness within All at once she stirs, whirls all then spills to the shore Wet and fertile Wild at first and then calms to retreat Always swelling with pride for her beloved divine This saga goes on and on The tides of the sea is forever of the moon While he shines above and she hastens below! J.K. Roseline

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Reviewed on April 6, 2014

Wonderful artwork J.K....product of a sensitive imagination
capture the romantic tale of the Moon distant from the Sea
...together...in freedom...barely touching...yet both powerful
work together as one...able to exist and dance in tune
to the same rhythm...never to far nor to close...do not need
to hold on tightly...enjoy the give-and-take relationship...
making each tide cycle valid...very much like a cycle of human
relationship.
Love the pic! too.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 17, 2013

...sweet sweet surrender
& especially sensual

Moon Pearls & Seatide Caresses
Vickie

Reviewed by Antony Joseph (Reader)

Reviewed on September 23, 2013

Good work, pretty descriptive, sensual and erotic.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 4, 2013

A lovely meaningful metaphorical offering; thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael True

Reviewed on August 2, 2013

Such vivid and fresh visions! I especially liked this line, "While he strolls the night in his shining armor." Brilliant image! M.True

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on August 1, 2013

Half of the Moon is always in sunlight
dreamily to moon about by day...the very
essence of the love in your poem, J K

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Lakshmi Sharma

Reviewed on July 29, 2013

A sweet poem. Very soothing. Keep it up Roseline ji

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on July 28, 2013

a wonderful story/poem details to be carefully taken in and contemplated.

Reviewed by E Phillips

What a powerful epic poem! And it builds to a climax of very wet components. Perfect opening line. I need a cigarette.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 27, 2013

The wonder of the heart is in its desire for the important things in life such as love and life through dreams. This reads more like a story and it fits so well with that desire within your heart.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Love between the city and the moon. What a lovely metaphor.

Ron

Reviewed by J. Roseline

Thanks Jerry. And happy to make you smile.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Fantastic write, J.K. I have never seen a better poem of long distance love. This made me smile.