I am enjoying writting haiku. Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message. It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes. I prefer a haiku that is simplistic and powerful. The following haiku, is a 5-4-5. It is a must that you click on the link below for the picture in order to get the full effect of it.
this is good...it's as simple as that. I am glad to see someone writing in the spirit of haiku, rather than the form...haiku work best when they are written concisely, with layers of meaning...like this work of yours.
Your choice of art in the link blends well, making this a total and delightufl package.
I will be visting your pages again.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
You have your first name which is exactly my second name and your surname which is precisely my first name. So we do have some affinity exculding age as you are young and I am getting on in years :-) This is a delightful haiku. I have written some but I prefer the longer poetry. Victor
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
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nice work.....Art Sun...
Your choice of art in the link blends well, making this a total and delightufl package.
I will be visting your pages again.
cycles of Nature...so simply...
So beautifully...
Amy Ramdass
Well said,
blessin's Sis Carmel,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Excellent concept.