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Cloistered
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 " As the Lord liveth the God of Israel, in whose sight I stand "

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She turned her back

on the secular world

and left her family and friends

an overpowering calling

to be of service to the Lord

her vocation as a bride of Christ

with vows of chastity and celibacy

intrinsic purity she bears in silence

a daily ritual of solemn prayer

and alms giving for the poor

solitude and detachment

frees her from the grip of ego

she lives her life in austerity

mindful of the treasure of the spirit

and craves the Savior's redemptive grace

spartan is her humble abode

a cloistered cell away from the world

self sacrifice is her gift to God

a faithful servant to the flock

virtuous woman to be admired

she gave everything up

in self denial

the wearing of her habit

denotes her humility

a life of contemplation

with compunction of heart

she brings love and compassion

into our troubled world

dedicating herself to the holy eucharist

her thirst and hunger for the divine

manifest and sacred

this nun has become a part

of the mystical chain

that connects all men and women

with the union of the Almighty

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
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 Reviews of "Cloistered"
Reviewed on February 19, 2006
An excellent write with an excellent triute to those wonderful women who never grow tired of their fellow men.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on February 19, 2006
Superb tribute to the sisterhood Peter.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
excellent tribute to these faithful servants ...

Reviewed on February 18, 2006
Peter,

A beautiful tribute to the Sisters. I have an aunt who is a Nun. I admire her faith and dedication to a meager life...nay, not meager. Full of prayer, love and devotion, she is fed beyond measure. :) Well done, my friend, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

There was one Sister, though, who used to TERRIFY me. She was my Catechism teacher...back in the day, one wasn't supposed to be left handed. Well, guess what...my knuckles met her ruler many times. Did it change me? Not in the least...when she was my teacher, she was old then (I thought). Hadn't seen her in YEARS. When my mother died 16 years ago, guess who came to the funeral! Sister! Yep--hid my left hand behind my back. Yes, she noticed...and laughed. :)

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
I once thought of the kind of service. Unfortunatly I have a bit of too lusty of a nature and not enough dedication to do what there wonderful women (and men) do for the service of mankind. ;) Silver

I will add to this that this is true of most of the servants of God. Those who have blemished the image of these dedicated people aren't really servants of God, but instead are servants of their own selfish needs.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
I write about the nun heavily in my upcoming novel From the Convent To The Rawhide: The Saga of Sadie Cade and Vi Montana. What does happen to nuns when they get older? They have no daughters or sons to take care of them in their old age like I do my mother. Most just work in gift shops at convents well beyond their working years. I include in my research in this novel a gerontology study of nuns and how they age more gracefully than normal women, as they have not endured childbirth, sex, alcohol, tobacco, all nuns have pretty well lived the same purity. Sister Pish, my main nun character came to settle the land in Utah where her parents came to settle the land following the trail of Brigham Young at the Pish Convent in St. George, Utah, my geographical setting. She has a duel with the Devil when she has a momentary lapse in judgement from a spell of Alzheimers. The Nun Study was very interesting research for me, Peter. Thanks for Cloistered this morning.

Sage

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
Such dedication deserves admiration and you brought it to light. So often we forget the role these women play.

Carmen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
A splendid tribute to the Nuns Peter! They are so often maligned or forgotten, yet most of them play a huge role in our world that goes unheralded. A beauty from your golden pen!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
Outstanding Ode to Mary!!

Thanks for sharing Peter...a great reminder!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
virtuous woman to be admired

I would say so, Peter, and you've penned her ode very well.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
Spending your life communing with God in prayer is indeed a noble calling.


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