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Seperate Hidden Compartments
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Surveying up until Now


I see those Separate Hidden Compartments


Designed to be whole and complete


Intrinsic in themselves


With an undercurrent of Harmony


Through Childhood to Manhood


All those I have known and loved


I will send shards and splinters


Of Unconditional Love


Spinning and showering


Towards them


In fragments of Affection


As a Testimony


Of my undying Gratitude and Appreciation


For sharing those priceless moments


Of Unfathomable Time


Just with them


And as a Legacy to you


From now on


I tell you the Secret


Commune with your Spirit


Deep within the Chambers of your Soul


That is All


You will ever Need


 


Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
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 Reviews of "Seperate Hidden Compartments"
Reviewed by Sylvia Thompson
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Nice !, Sylvia
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 18, 2006
Beautiful, Peter.
Thanks for a lovely poem. I actually
understand it too! (grin)
Love,
Becca
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 17, 2006
Had me thinking of the secret lives most have, with thoughts they are afraid to share, that sometimes. lead to tragedy.

Ron
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
Truly superb Dear Peter!
You are God's channel with writes like this!
How comforting and reassuring is your wisdom ... All you will ever need...
Unconditional Love, Suzie :-D
(Sorry I've been away long)
~~ A Great Sept 11 poem!!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
Reviewed on September 14, 2006
Peter, your pen overflows with wisdom and beauty. An elemental truth, but it can be a difficult journey to look deep within those hidden compartments and find our true spirit. Hugs, Liza
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2006
Commune with your Spirit
Deep within the Chambers of your Soul
That is All
You will ever Need <----- Peace and wisdoms secret..
Perfect Peter...




Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on September 13, 2006
So true these words you are saying are so true.

< < < <Commune with your Spirit
Deep within the Chambers of your Soul
That is All
You will ever Need.>>>>

Thanks for sharing your wisdom with us.

Angela Contreras
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on September 13, 2006
Peter, this is just full of meaning and every time I read it, I discover something new or another "duck in your row"...(thanks Kate). Thank you for sharing this shard of your appreciation with us in hopes that each maintains a small space in the compartments and cycles and shares a place in his chambers with you. So nice to be able to identify with anothers valuable and natural words...
Love,
Taylor
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2006


Commune with your Spirit



Deep within the Chambers of your Soul



That is All



You will ever Need


Indeed TRUTH!

profound write Peter! Thankyou..


Vesna.)
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Ahh.. we is on the same page and wavelength, it seems, Perfectly Poised Peter!! :)) All your cute little spiritual ducks are collected as a paradigm flotilla here, their peaceful ripples flowing outwards to bless and increase us all as we progress merrily, merrily down the myriad streams of our own lives... Just love it!! TY K xx
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Peter....Jesus is alive and well.....in you!

Awesome write.

Love&Hugs, Rhonda
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Peter you are so profound! You enlighten, share love, inspire, and teach, all in one glorious poem! Thank you sweetman!;-) Eileen
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Peter:

You are so filled with wonderment. You surprise me with your wonderful wisdom and words of expression and love each time you write so beautifully.

What a delight to read this offering!!!!! Thank you God for delivering to us an angel like you!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Wise and well-expressed, Peter. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
a most wise and inspired poem, Peter ... the fragments of your supernal affection come together as an enlightned whole and are indeed a legacy to commune with ...
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
thanks for the reminder!
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
well said
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
You hit the nail on the head with this one
A true expression of sharing from spirit
There is always more to give
we renew, and grow........and share

very wise

pax A
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
exceptional piece, Peter!! You are a very wise man...

Susan
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Reviewed on September 11, 2006

"Secret Hidden Compartments"

Speechless, this is a magnificent confessional
narrative. Like a gentle love song, I loved the eloquence
in which you have written this wonderful work of art!

"I will send shards and splinters
Of Uncondtional Love"

muah...over the top!
I loved it!

Continued blessings and enlightenment
through your work.

Sincerely,
Gwendolyn
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Hello Peter, glad to 'meet' you.
This is an excellent poem.
"... shards and splinters of unconditional love ..."
What wonderful images those words invoke in the mind of your reader.
Hugs,
CJ
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Peter, you expertly describe how true happiness can be found within if we just look hard enough. Warriors of light, 'know the power of words'. Lovely stirring composition. Love Panda:)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
One great offering Peter!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
exceptional work! great opening!!!!----?jaydan
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Isn't this a great wisdom? If people would just try looking inside themselves they'd find a storehouse of answers. Your thinking fits so well with my world Peter.
Thank you.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Creative and a message of light yes we find our greatest friend within our own souls. Powerful Peter.

Bless you,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Intensely imaginative way of saying to all friends and relatives..."I love you!". Well done Peter
Felix
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Wise words from you today; thanks, Peter! Very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
The spirit must guide the body in all that it does. And if the spirit is founded on good moral values, everyone could be an upright person. Great sentiments. Victor
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Absolutely, Peter, very wise and spiritual write to read this morning; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Your final words sum up this piece so eloquently...I loved this from beginning to end!

Myrna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Commune with your Spirit
Deep within the Chambers of your Soul
That is All
You will ever Need

Peter, I suddenly feel compelled to say the same thing you recently said to me, AMEN!


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