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A Whale Song
by Cheryl Kaye Tardif → (All Poetry by Cheryl Kaye Tardif)
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Amidst the ocean depths, far below the light,
A lone whale glides by in her watery flight.
A cry so lonely, a wailing of despair,
Something precious lost in the great somewhere.

Serene, yet watchful, moving always in fear
Of death's stillness, she searches ever near.
Pulling sunlight upward with care,
She caresses the surface and mists the salty air.

Nothing! Not a movement, except a hulking mass,
A predator's scent, a watchful, sweeping pass.
Dangerously taunting, the sight draws her near
As battered nets pull in Death and despair.

Her baby! Her angel! Death had claimed its song,
While a quiet stillness seemed to linger on.
Across the endless ocean, far below the sky,
A mournful mother sang a haunting lullaby.



 ©2004 Cheryl Kaye Tardif



 


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 Reviews of "A Whale Song"
Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler
Reviewed on April 24, 2011
Beautifully written.

Tom

Reviewed by eliza keating
Reviewed on August 25, 2010
this is simply an incredible piece of writing ..loved this ...eliza keating

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 8, 2010
A thought-provoking, potent poem about one of the world's greatest treasures.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Katina Williams
Reviewed on May 25, 2010
You can sense the pain and despair of the whale in your words. Beautiful poetry.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 24, 2010
Super poem, Cheryl

Reviewed by eugene geminiano (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2010
Great thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Alexandra Midnight (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Wonderful. I love the whole image you portray. Whales are beautiful creatures with a mournful cry. I often wonder what it really is they are calling for.
AM

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 4, 2009
Tragically sad poem. Very well penned Cheryl; I really enjoyed reading it.

Anna

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
I like the contrast between peace and danger in this poem. Very chilling. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 10, 2008
Beautiful images in this hauntingly sad poem.. Well done!......M

Reviewed by Natasha Bowman
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Absoloutley beautiful and thought-provoking ...
Applies not only to this creature of the water, but real life as well.
Loved it.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
Haunting. The cries of a mother who has lost her baby knows no species. The heart breaking ache all the same. Love the imagery. Sad but reality. Bless you. Liz

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on August 4, 2007
Sad and poignant. Powerful and emotional poem. Nice job.

Reviewed by Agnes Levine
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
In depth telling of sorrow. Powerful words to force the reader to feel and mourn and seek protective mode. This is beautiful.

Reviewed on October 31, 2006

"A Whale Song"
Simply beautiful and captivating!
The imagery, and the decription of the mourning
mother and fallen angel...a great read Cheryl!

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2004
Beautifully presented and composed, I understand the a whale's song can travel 100 miles over the ocean floor. Excellent.

Reg.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Whooee! Great. I was born in Peace River, Alberta so I feel a kinship with you. This poem of yours is a wondrous offering and I respectfully and gratefully thank you for it. Love and peace to you, Cheryl. Regis

Reviewed on August 13, 2004
(((cheryl)))

THIS. is. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just stunning in imagery and verse--perfection!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
WOW! So powerful, and well-written, very sad, enjoyed this poem.

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Absolutely beautiful Cheryl.
Sad, mournful story. It made my heart ache.
Especialy because we all know it's true.
Good write.

Love, Bonnie


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