the shower (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

wow now that is one interesting shower.
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

MMMMMmm :)
Love To Cleanse The Soul While Reaching For The Hot Waters Within "the shower"
Peace, Love & Poetry
Vickie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on February 8, 2009

It's getting hot in here!!!!! Fee!!!!!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Man! that was hot. Very, very, very tantalizing. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 7, 2009

Wow! And thanks for this R rated poem. It looks like you have inspired my brother Jersey to take a shower!

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

If that's a sin, I'm going to hell for sure.
Made me smile--one sorely needed.
Thanks, sweetie.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

A fine ode to the shower, Fee. Hot stuff. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

What a beautiful picture to flounder. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Ooooh-la-la! Hot & steamy! Sounds like a perfect shower to me :) ~ Hugs, Lizzie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Not always a good idea...I broke my ribs in a shower....but hey you right...nice place to make out!.!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Course, when you're short like me, there's a possibility of drowning while letting your partner get warm. ha, ha. Sizzling imagery, Fee. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Problem is that someone's rear sticks out in the cold, not covered by the warm stream of water.
Otherwise, nicely done :-)
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

There is nothing better than a steamy, sizzling shower for two!!

Carole~

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Okay... so I've been missing something here!!! I go into the shower for many reasons...but this?? wow... I use the shower to cry...to grieve...to clean my body...wash my hair...and wash away my troubles... Who knew it could be used for such erotica...hehe... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Oh yes! I've had some steamy showers myself, so you're right, Fee, it's absolutely the most intimate loveplay!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Sounds like a lot of excitement can come out of sharing a shower, as we always end up having to have another one ALONE. Thank you for sharing Cuz another great write.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

I want to be dirty so I can be ordered to take one shower like this one, only a Canadian can dream how to use differently a bar of soap, or I am wrong?

Georg

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Now if I had someone to shower with like that, then I "MIGHT" bathe more often...wouldn't that make the other brothers Ed happy...;-) e

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 6, 2009

Loved this...perfect photo to compliment your words!

Reviewed by Jack Kuperman

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

The next time in the shower, I'll recite your poem. We'll see how it sounds there

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

Why Fee, Sharing a shower is my favorite thing to do! Nice poem!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

Mmm, hmmm!!! Sounds hot and steamy and just what I want after a hard day....a hard night ;)

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

Very nice portrayal of love in motion...but what's the Sin. Wonderful visuals. Thank you for sharing! Be Well. Carin

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

EEEEEEEEEEEEEwith a capital T EROTIC...WOW...love the poem and the pic...it allowed me to see it all...WOW...Love and hugs and laughs, Love, BONNIE

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

Capital and Bold "E" -- for erotic write it is. R

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 5, 2009

Wowee!!!!! What a HOT shower this is!!! Can I join in too?

Sandie Angel :o)