Yes, a very dark moment, Fee. A nice ending. We can hope. Hugs,
Sheila

We do have others waiting in the birth of our death
Just as we have them here on earth
Its an embraceful offering Fee
No matter the darkness which veils
Blessings
Vickie

Such deep dark thoughts confronting one's soul and yet the light does come shining through to offer salvation..

Be always safe,
Karen

AHHHH the darkness cannot take away the love you feel. Well done Fee. So good to see you posting .
hug
Kathy

No one should go into that night without being accompanied by love. A heart touching and profound pen Fee.

well written expressing many emotions-

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Fee there is a silver lining behind every cloud...erm, shroud, and when we see the ones that went before us, we are at peace, and our soul can rest. Thank you for this wonderful poem. I could see and feel the terror of the darkness the shroud brings, but then seeing her in the light made me smile.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie

Too DARK for you, bro'...used to the light hearted ones you write...e

I thought this was going to be dark and sad but it shows that there's a silver lining ........ comfort and contendment at the end.

Donna

Keep your eyes on that light, it will sustain you and nourish you and make you heal faster.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber ""V

This may be a rather dark piece, but it sure captures the feelings well. But there is so much hope springing from the darkness! Hope all is well Felix.

Peace,
Dayvid

May you not pass anytime soon, Felix. We need you, and your tireless attention and kindness to others.

Hello Mr.Perry I hope you are feeling better today. The rays of light mean only that you are on your way to recovery.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

..good thing for those rays of sunshine interrupting you....may they keep on intruding :) Hope you are feeling better soon~

Dark, but very good! Fee, you'd best stick around for a very long time to come!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Very well penned, my precious friend! I felt that shroud pressing down on me each time I read this poem. Sending some positive energy your way, Fee.....catch it!

Hugs,
Anna

I agree with Ed, tis dark, but well writen.

Cheers,
Dan

That blanked you have snatched from my dungeon, you thief! (LOL)

Georg

Quite dark and chilling, Mr. Fee.