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Until Never
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Barbarian at REMO'S WORLD © Fernando Remo Grisolia

A little foray into the land of legend...


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She promised him until never,
and he obediently complied.
He thought she meant, "forever,"
In his naïve ignorance, she lied.

He waited for her, forever,
out in the cold and wet.
While she took many a lover,
and hardly broke a sweat.

For she was above his station,
so high he could not reach.
The old ways said it was so,
in what the elders teach.

The rules could not be broken,
and on them she relied.
Her decisions made for her,
to his entreaties, she just sighed.

He steeled himself in sorrow,
and traveled far alone.
His might and strength a marvel,
brought to a perfect hone.

The old ways always crumble,
when they go beyond the breech.
The rabble needed a leader,
their distant call to reach.

He rushed to their deliverance,
and brought the pious pomposity down.
He crushed their arrogant ideas,
and refused to wear a crown.

He found her in a hovel,
on the mountain side.
He carried her off to never,
he carried her as his bride.

She waited for him until never,
he thought never was too late.
We all know never never comes,
but it comes to some who wait.

Copyright 2009 © Ronald W. Hull

7/25/09


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 Reviews of "Until Never"
Reviewed by m d (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2013
This got to me, beautifully written. Sometimes waiting blesses us with more love than we ever thought was possible.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 2, 2009
a wonderful poetic piece of lore on steroids Ron -- a titillating poem and a variation on the old adage of, "good things always come to he who waits" -- great writing my friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 30, 2009
Somewhere in everything
there are the threads of honor
woven into or pulled out and cast aside.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Quite a change from you Ron! I liked this poetic tale with the wisdom message, it has an old world flavor with a new world taste...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Wow! What a fine tale yet I do detect a morale in it too, wisely written...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
an interesting sense of logic culminates in this nicely written tale ...

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Great written piece,I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
My what a "noble tale" - and very much a fine fiction. In the real world as you well know, we are quite on our own... But I enjoyed your spin on it...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
EXCELLENT!! BRAVA!! I really enjoyed this read. At first, it reminded me of myself, though I have never been all that caught up in the division of classes. The ray of hope held here just balances out all the rest and leaves the reader with a very positive outlook.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
Sounds like something worth waiting for. I enjoyed your foray.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
Wowwwww ..this wonderful writing sweet man..enjoyed very much...sorry I havent been here much ...been so busy with my work etc.....not to much time for much these days but I did post yesterday I certainly hope you enjoy....stay safe and well ok sweet friend..Hugss

Reviewed on July 26, 2009
Ron,

I applaud this most beautiful tale and the old cliche, "good things come the those who wait!"


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