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The Nearness of Mars
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Mars and Venus


Poem Artwork

The nearness of Mars
close and closer still to Earth
ruddy Mars blazes.



See Venus and Mars
Lovers and close opposites
burn in black night sky.

Loving little girls
draw rainbows hearts and flowers.
Little boys draw swords.


The Wilderness Within

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 Reviews of "The Nearness of Mars"
Reviewed by Jay Squires
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
What a tantalizing play on the word "draw." You have an intelligence in your poetry that scintillates, sizzles and lingers hotly on the brain. The imagery takes you, the intelligence holds you.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Fascinating Haiku series. Gender contrasting to a Tee.
Leland

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Barbara,

Three short stanzas and you bring into it so much! Fantasy and reality, love and war. Very wonderful play on words and on the imagination!

Sherry

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Fascinating work indeed, and I love the fantasy and nature combination!
~Nikki~

Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Mars and Venus in permanent and mutual balance... Simply wonderful.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
this is good, the lover and the warrior.. good write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Fascinating write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Fascinating celestial bodies, nice poem. I posted a 'Tanka' yesterday on Mars, called 'Celestial.' Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
I love this one the fantasy and nature combined.
"Loving little girls
draw rainbows hearts and flowers.
Little boys draw swords."
Lady peg


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